Meenakshi Raina Poet Choka

You Won'T

you won't know my pain
     when silent tears mix with rain
          get washed without being seen

you won't hear my voice
     when cold cries mix with loud noise
          I cling alone to my woes

you won't see my love
     when time mixes with money
          there are no memories made




July 21, 2016.
Compose a Choka - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Janis Thompson
Syllables: 5 - 7 - 7, 5 - 7 - 7, 5 - 7 - 7.

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Sandra Haight July 24, 2016 at 5:36 PM Meenakshi, congratulations on your fine win in the 'Choka' contest! Hugs, Sandra

Alexis Y. July 24, 2016 at 3:28 PM Hi Meenakshi, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Janis Medders Tobechi July 23, 2016 at 7:33 PM Congratulations on your win, Meenakshi. There is a lot of pain in this poem. Thanks for being in my contest.