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You Were the One Then

by Betty L. Hobbs Then came the breeze That blew like the wind And took you away Away with the wind You were the one then And now you are gone And I’m in my home A place to write I am all alone You were the one then When I was young And you were then Seems things change Like the wind Then comes the rain Then the pain Now there’s happiness again I’ve felt the breeze I’ve felt the wind There’s A change in me I feel The breeze I’ve found Jesus I’ve Been On my knees © Copyright 2004 Betty L. Hobbs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/31/2010 6:53:00 PM
Betty, congrats on your featured poem of the week. Hope you are enjoying the new year. May you be blessed with a wonderful & joyful New Year! Take care*Luv~SKAT
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Date: 12/28/2010 10:28:00 PM
Very descriptive. This reminds me of the old fifties song "The Breeze" by Kay Starr.
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Date: 12/28/2010 7:03:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 12/27/2010 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Betty. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2010 6:03:00 AM
Good to know this about you..Enjoyed your work..Congratulations on being featured on homepage..Sara
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Date: 12/5/2010 7:34:00 PM
Enjoyd it.Impressive thoughts.-kashinath
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