You Were

you
were my
protection
but you were not
here, always gone, gone
now retired__here
always in
talking
you

marriageninette

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Valsa George

August 29, 2023 at 9:46 AM

Whether working or retired, he is not available ! A sad thing ! There should be quality time spent together ! Beautiful ninette.

Sara Kendrick

August 29, 2023 at 2:47 PM

Valsa, Yes, sadly that is the way it is mostly today. Thanks for dropping by with such a nice review of my work. Sara

Beryl Edmonds

August 15, 2023 at 1:20 PM

A great Ninette Sara, as long as he’s here you can turn a deaf ear… Belle

Sara Kendrick

August 15, 2023 at 2:52 PM

Belle, Yes, as long as he is here he will be talking. I can't imagine what it would be like for him not to be here for a long time or for the rest of my life. I know you know what it is like. Thanks for the visit. Sara