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you were my protection but you were not here, always gone, gone now retired__here always in talking you

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Valsa George

Date: 8/29/2023 9:46:00 AM

Whether working or retired, he is not available ! A sad thing ! There should be quality time spent together ! Beautiful ninette.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/29/2023 2:47:00 PM

Valsa, Yes, sadly that is the way it is mostly today. Thanks for dropping by with such a nice review of my work. Sara

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/15/2023 1:20:00 PM

A great Ninette Sara, as long as he’s here you can turn a deaf ear… Belle

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2023 2:52:00 PM

Belle, Yes, as long as he is here he will be talking. I can't imagine what it would be like for him not to be here for a long time or for the rest of my life. I know you know what it is like. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 8/15/2023 11:48:00 AM

Not much difference, is it? lol Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Sara. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2023 2:49:00 PM

Bill, yes, you have stated a truth. Not much difference. Thanks for the blessings because I need them. Sara