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You Touched Me

You touched me as the sunlight
     on the birth of a new day
You touched me as the firelight
     in a soft and gentle way
You touched me as the starlight
     from the calm heavens above
You touched me as the moonlight
     with a gentle kiss of love.

Copyright © Trudy Diane Rider | Year Posted 2009

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Robert A. Dufresne Date: 6/20/2012 5:22:00 PM an excellent and I was going to say very touching but I guess that would be reiterating a bit! : ) A beautifully written poem and of course deserrving of its place in glory. Congratulations Trudy Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/17/2012 2:10:00 PM Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Ronny Madonsela Date: 6/16/2012 6:33:00 AM no, this poem touched me. Well deserve win. *smiles* Ron Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 6/15/2012 12:38:00 PM Beautiful poem Trudy.Congrats on your 1st place win! Login to Reply

Trudy Diane Rider Date: 6/15/2012 11:37:00 AM Thank you all! And thank you Brian for another great contest~! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/15/2012 11:33:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#183" contest Trudy. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Terry O'Leary Date: 6/15/2012 10:58:00 AM Wonderful... Congratulations... Terry Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/15/2012 7:57:00 AM Just beautiful. BIG congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Joann Grisetti Date: 6/15/2012 7:38:00 AM Congratulations on your winning poem, a beautiful and peacefull read. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/15/2012 6:49:00 AM a graceful read.. congrats on your special win, trudy..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 6/15/2012 5:51:00 AM Wow, simply beautiful! Trudy, this lovely poem is soft and romantic. I love it!! Congrats on your win. Love and Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 6/15/2012 5:02:00 AM Trudy-Congrats on this first place gem. Login to Reply

Donielle Smith Date: 10/20/2009 8:27:00 AM Hi, thanks for your comment on my poem, I enjoyed reading yours as well. Romantically said with words flowing from one's heart. Continuted success!! Donielle S. Login to Reply

Steve Malebranche Date: 8/17/2009 2:56:00 AM Love expressed fully...wonderful piece from the heart...we all long to be "touched" this way Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 7/27/2009 6:09:00 PM very romantic and lovely.. sunlight, firelight, starlight moonlight.. aaah ... that is love..for sure Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 7/26/2009 8:45:00 AM What a dreamy poem Trudy, so beautiful>>James Login to Reply

Adeleke Adeite Date: 7/24/2009 7:01:00 AM wonderful write with interesting imageries, you are such a creative writer... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here... great you! adeleke Login to Reply

Steve Meadows Date: 7/23/2009 8:52:00 PM this is really good! Login to Reply

James Knox Date: 7/23/2009 8:11:00 PM excellent , well written :) Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/23/2009 7:33:00 PM Very gentle and moving. I love all the images you use to convey your love. This special poem has "touched me" as well. Beautiful words in a delightful rhyme form! Great work, Trudy. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 7/23/2009 5:46:00 PM Sweet and lovely....a nice one Trudy!! ~ Carrie Login to Reply