Trudy Diane Rider Poet Rhyme

You Touched Me

You touched me as the sunlight
     on the birth of a new day
You touched me as the firelight
     in a soft and gentle way
You touched me as the starlight
     from the calm heavens above
You touched me as the moonlight
     with a gentle kiss of love.

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Robert A. Dufresne June 20, 2012 at 5:22 PM an excellent and I was going to say very touching but I guess that would be reiterating a bit! : ) A beautifully written poem and of course deserrving of its place in glory. Congratulations Trudy

Debbie Guzzi June 17, 2012 at 2:10 PM Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love

Ronny Madonsela June 16, 2012 at 6:33 AM no, this poem touched me. Well deserve win. *smiles* Ron

Kash Poet June 15, 2012 at 12:38 PM Beautiful poem Trudy.Congrats on your 1st place win!

Trudy Diane Rider June 15, 2012 at 11:37 AM Thank you all! And thank you Brian for another great contest~!

Carol Sunshine Brown June 15, 2012 at 11:33 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#183" contest Trudy. Love, Carol

Terry O'Leary June 15, 2012 at 10:58 AM Wonderful... Congratulations... Terry

Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2012 at 7:57 AM Just beautiful. BIG congrats on your win.

Joann Grisetti June 15, 2012 at 7:38 AM Congratulations on your winning poem, a beautiful and peacefull read.

Nette Onclaud June 15, 2012 at 6:49 AM a graceful read.. congrats on your special win, trudy..:) huggs!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 15, 2012 at 5:51 AM Wow, simply beautiful! Trudy, this lovely poem is soft and romantic. I love it!! Congrats on your win. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Gwendolen Song June 15, 2012 at 5:02 AM Trudy-Congrats on this first place gem.

Donielle Smith October 20, 2009 at 8:27 AM Hi, thanks for your comment on my poem, I enjoyed reading yours as well. Romantically said with words flowing from one's heart. Continuted success!! Donielle S.

Steve Malebranche August 17, 2009 at 2:56 AM Love expressed fully...wonderful piece from the heart...we all long to be "touched" this way

Constance La France July 27, 2009 at 6:09 PM very romantic and lovely.. sunlight, firelight, starlight moonlight.. aaah ... that is love..for sure

James Fraser July 26, 2009 at 8:45 AM What a dreamy poem Trudy, so beautiful>>James

Adeleke Adeite July 24, 2009 at 7:01 AM wonderful write with interesting imageries, you are such a creative writer... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here... great you! adeleke

Steve Meadows July 23, 2009 at 8:52 PM this is really good!

James Knox July 23, 2009 at 8:11 PM excellent , well written :)

Carolyn Devonshire July 23, 2009 at 7:33 PM Very gentle and moving. I love all the images you use to convey your love. This special poem has "touched me" as well. Beautiful words in a delightful rhyme form! Great work, Trudy. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards July 23, 2009 at 5:46 PM Sweet and lovely....a nice one Trudy!! ~ Carrie