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You Touched Me

You touched me as the sunlight on the birth of a new day You touched me as the firelight in a soft and gentle way You touched me as the starlight from the calm heavens above You touched me as the moonlight with a gentle kiss of love.

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/20/2012 5:22:00 PM

an excellent and I was going to say very touching but I guess that would be reiterating a bit! : ) A beautifully written poem and of course deserrving of its place in glory. Congratulations Trudy

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/17/2012 2:10:00 PM

Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 6/16/2012 6:33:00 AM

no, this poem touched me. Well deserve win. *smiles* Ron

Kash Poet

Date: 6/15/2012 12:38:00 PM

Beautiful poem Trudy.Congrats on your 1st place win!

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 6/15/2012 11:37:00 AM

Thank you all! And thank you Brian for another great contest~!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/15/2012 11:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#183" contest Trudy. Love, Carol

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/15/2012 10:58:00 AM

Wonderful... Congratulations... Terry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2012 7:57:00 AM

Just beautiful. BIG congrats on your win.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/15/2012 7:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem, a beautiful and peacefull read.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/15/2012 6:49:00 AM

a graceful read.. congrats on your special win, trudy..:) huggs!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/15/2012 5:51:00 AM

Wow, simply beautiful! Trudy, this lovely poem is soft and romantic. I love it!! Congrats on your win. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/15/2012 5:02:00 AM

Trudy-Congrats on this first place gem.

Donielle Smith

Date: 10/20/2009 8:27:00 AM

Hi, thanks for your comment on my poem, I enjoyed reading yours as well. Romantically said with words flowing from one's heart. Continuted success!! Donielle S.

Steve Malebranche

Date: 8/17/2009 2:56:00 AM

Love expressed fully...wonderful piece from the heart...we all long to be "touched" this way

Constance La France

Date: 7/27/2009 6:09:00 PM

very romantic and lovely.. sunlight, firelight, starlight moonlight.. aaah ... that is love..for sure

James Fraser

Date: 7/26/2009 8:45:00 AM

What a dreamy poem Trudy, so beautiful>>James

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/24/2009 7:01:00 AM

wonderful write with interesting imageries, you are such a creative writer... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here... great you! adeleke

Steve Meadows

Date: 7/23/2009 8:52:00 PM

this is really good!

James Knox

Date: 7/23/2009 8:11:00 PM

excellent , well written :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/23/2009 7:33:00 PM

Very gentle and moving. I love all the images you use to convey your love. This special poem has "touched me" as well. Beautiful words in a delightful rhyme form! Great work, Trudy. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/23/2009 5:46:00 PM

Sweet and lovely....a nice one Trudy!! ~ Carrie