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You Think I’m Dreaming

I felt the sea on my pulse, the salt in my brunette, pebbles underfoot, the net dragging me. I felt the familiar ebb and flow, close to shore, tippy-toes. The coconut permeates the dawn, its scent infiltrating, its oils reverberating. I feel the palms bending low, so low I can touch their feather fronds; and fronts clashing. First drops of the storm, so tender-pitter-patter, light thunder, soft lightning. Nearby volcano erupting, you think I’m dreaming about your lava eyes. Beach blanket soaked, settling into muddy sand, its tartan, tanned and connecting with the waves, overlapping. The island’s going under - the thunder, ecstatic; its lightning erratic. Surrounded by water, a dugout with flapping wings - the canoe is land. Lily pads on steroids float upon deceptive waters - so pretty I can touch them; and caiman too. All that’s ever been resides in sandy eyes; I’ve collected seashells in my mind.

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Date: 8/9/2025 5:21:00 PM
Wow, this poem is amazing! Excellent descriptions and full of life. I am grateful to be led to this today. A Fave :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/9/2025 9:16:00 PM
So glad you like! Thank you for the fave! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/9/2025 3:42:00 PM
wonderful island dream you cooked up!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/9/2025 5:02:00 PM
Thank you, David :)
Date: 8/9/2025 2:45:00 PM
Your poem took me to a place exotic and lovely, Kim. The imagery is just gorgeous! It's impossible to pick a favorite line-I love them all. This poem is a fave. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/9/2025 5:01:00 PM
Thank you kindly, dear Evelyn! <3
Date: 8/9/2025 1:02:00 AM
I really like how this poem makes you feel like you’re right there by the sea. The smells, the sounds, even the storm coming—it all feels so real. The ending is nice too, like you’re holding onto those little memories. Super vivid and easy to get lost in.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/9/2025 5:19:00 AM
Thank you, dear one! So glad you like this one! :)
Date: 8/8/2025 4:25:00 PM
Appreciate the descriptive words and lines of your poem....engaging from beginning to end. Now I want to visit Galveston Beach :-) hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2025 6:43:00 PM
You made me smile, dear Sara! Hugs
Date: 8/8/2025 3:08:00 PM
Lovely journey, Kim; very descriptive and captivating. Was going to watch "Mysterious Island", this evening, but this is better. Well done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2025 6:43:00 PM
So glad you liked it, my friend! :)
Date: 8/8/2025 2:31:00 PM
Wow! This would make one heck of a movie, methinks. What vision you have, Kim. I feel as if I've witnessed an explosion just reading this poem. ~ The Eyes Have It
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2025 6:44:00 PM
You made my day! Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 8/8/2025 1:01:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "You Think I’m Dreaming" write. Great story... Now I am dreaming of a sandy beach with seashells. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2025 6:45:00 PM
So glad you are now dreaming… Hugs and thank you, Paula!

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