You , the 'I' In Me

your breath is my soul 
you are the only reason for my whole ...
without you , who m I ?
without you, even i cant die
you, the 'I' in me...
you, the sky in me ....
my salvation, my "last day" are you ...
my faith ,my "mine" you .....



(Mine - my I-ness is you)


© ßíkräm Singh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Adebayo Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Lovely and breathtaking
Roper Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 8:28 PM
:) 7
Roper Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 8:28 PM
How beautiful,such a romantic write for your beloved, a 7. Blessings Eve
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January 31, 2015 at 1:29 AM
Bikram, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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January 31, 2015 at 1:03 AM
Bikram, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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January 29, 2015 at 2:25 PM
a beautiful write... nad!
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January 29, 2015 at 12:08 PM
Beautiful verses about love and faith and a world entire about philosophers and poets, saints and religious men cannot find all the truth.But heart feels it.Best regards and wishes.
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