You Tease Me So Nicely

You tease me so nicely. I love your flair -
the way you hold me and when you hold back!
I love your fingers moving through my hair.
Downward. . . the scintilla of a smack.
You know just where I like it! Leisurely
meandering along my body, you
are an elixir, pouring out on me.
My panacea, always you imbue
felicity in me with whispers of
those dulcet “nothings” falling on my ear.
How eloquent the language of your love
when your soft moans are all I need to hear.
Be naughty. I don’t mind it – night or day -
but never tease that you will go away!

Feb 5, 2018 
for Edward McCall's "Eloquent banter; You tease me so nicely"
and now for Laura Loo's Your Favorite Poem Written in February Contest
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Payton Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 4:09 PM
Lovely and congrats on the win, Andrea.
Roper Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 9:40 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea! Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 7:12 PM
Back with congrats, Andrea. Well done.
Mccall Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 4:15 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you for entering my contest. This is such a delicious piece and I love the line, Always you imbue felicity in me with whispers of those dulcet "nothings". Jeez how did you come up with that one? so cool congrats on your win.
Canerdy Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Great piece, Andrea--CONGRATS! Janice
Kannan Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 6:42 AM
Lovely one,Andrea.... Good luck in the contest...
Callus Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 3:48 PM
I'm still savoring your lovely romantic take on this contest theme, Andrea! I gather the motto that accompanies this poem is: Tease to please! ~ Regards // paul
One Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 2:35 PM
ERm a bit sensual for you Andrea, lol... Nice to see this side from your pen...
Michael Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 1:37 PM
A lovely poem...All the best Andrea
Pinet Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 1:31 PM
This is well written, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem. I really like your style. You're creative and innovative in your subject matter. You say things that get you thinking other things and the reader’s not confused by the transition. You have a poet’s soul, quick wit and a colorful imagination ...a deadly combination to success. Emile.
Horn Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 1:06 PM
Birds and bees always try to tease; Known to knock many new knees; Saw her bra, And la di da; Robin red breast was in tall trees.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 12:44 PM
This is a sexy one. My kind of banter.
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 11:31 AM
Feels like a hot tease. Written beautifully, your poem shines as always..a fun read..best for a win, Andrea.
Mhangwa Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:41 AM
How romantic Andrea! I had missed reading your work
Gondolf Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:09 AM
Nicely done, Andrea, best of luck in the contest. I chose to skip this one for fear that my banter is more naughty than eloquent. haha John
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 9:43 AM
A darling poem, Andrea. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 9:42 AM
Ahh! Love it, Andrea! The words an elixir of their own! Lovely!
Allison Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 8:59 AM
aww this is so lovely and romantic Andrea good luck in the contest I doubt my poem will place lol :-) hugs jan xx
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