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You Tease Me So Nicely

You tease me so nicely. I love your flair - the way you hold me and when you hold back! I love your fingers moving through my hair. Downward. . . the scintilla of a smack. You know just where I like it! Leisurely meandering along my body, you are an elixir, pouring out on me. My panacea, always you imbue felicity in me with whispers of those dulcet “nothings” falling on my ear. How eloquent the language of your love when your soft moans are all I need to hear. Be naughty. I don’t mind it – night or day - but never tease that you will go away! Feb 5, 2018 for Edward McCall's "Eloquent banter; You tease me so nicely" and now for Laura Loo's Your Favorite Poem Written in February Contest

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Date: 2/14/2018 4:09:00 PM
Lovely and congrats on the win, Andrea.
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/11/2018 7:12:00 PM
Back with congrats, Andrea. Well done.
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Date: 2/11/2018 4:15:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you for entering my contest. This is such a delicious piece and I love the line, Always you imbue felicity in me with whispers of those dulcet "nothings". Jeez how did you come up with that one? so cool congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/11/2018 1:38:00 PM
Great piece, Andrea--CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 2/6/2018 6:42:00 AM
Lovely one,Andrea.... Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 2/5/2018 3:48:00 PM
I'm still savoring your lovely romantic take on this contest theme, Andrea! I gather the motto that accompanies this poem is: Tease to please! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/5/2018 2:35:00 PM
ERm a bit sensual for you Andrea, lol... Nice to see this side from your pen...
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Date: 2/5/2018 1:37:00 PM
A lovely poem...All the best Andrea
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Date: 2/5/2018 1:31:00 PM
This is well written, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem. I really like your style. You're creative and innovative in your subject matter. You say things that get you thinking other things and the reader’s not confused by the transition. You have a poet’s soul, quick wit and a colorful imagination ...a deadly combination to success. Emile.
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Date: 2/5/2018 1:06:00 PM
Birds and bees always try to tease; Known to knock many new knees; Saw her bra, And la di da; Robin red breast was in tall trees.
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Date: 2/5/2018 12:44:00 PM
This is a sexy one. My kind of banter.
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Date: 2/5/2018 11:31:00 AM
Feels like a hot tease. Written beautifully, your poem shines as always..a fun read..best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 2/5/2018 10:41:00 AM
How romantic Andrea! I had missed reading your work
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Date: 2/5/2018 10:09:00 AM
Nicely done, Andrea, best of luck in the contest. I chose to skip this one for fear that my banter is more naughty than eloquent. haha John
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Date: 2/5/2018 9:43:00 AM
A darling poem, Andrea. Well done.
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Date: 2/5/2018 9:42:00 AM
Ahh! Love it, Andrea! The words an elixir of their own! Lovely!
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Date: 2/5/2018 8:59:00 AM
aww this is so lovely and romantic Andrea good luck in the contest I doubt my poem will place lol :-) hugs jan xx
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