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You Tease Me So Nicely

His interest awakens as a young woman sauntered in the pub as he laid eyes on her bosom. Enticing from the moment he saw her. Her skin purrs of warm weather copper honeysuckle, her eyes waves' deep royal blue skies. She wears a black plunging neckline leather dress hugging her form, outlining every wonderful feminine curve. She's striking and beautiful. His thoughts a blur while she leans teasing with eloquent banter. With a smile she kicked off her black patent five inch heels, singing as the riff of the music came alive filling the room. He sought her unable to turn away her teasing resistance and her friendly, bantering play. He heard the rhythm trying his hardest to keep his distance. Her wavy red hair loose a riot around her face as she listens and dances across the room, while the rest of her long locks fell down her back. With the music going she closed her eyes and did a little spin, there was a delectable teasing, bright smile when she opened her eyes. You tease me so nicely. 2-3-2018

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Date: 3/3/2018 1:28:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Eve.
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Date: 3/1/2018 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations Eve on your wonderful win with your seductive and enthralling poem. Just beautiful!
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Date: 2/27/2018 9:47:00 AM
It caught me off guard when I saw your name, thought for sure this was someone else, (a male for sure) great write Eve, your knowledge of the male's mind is uncanny!!Congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 2/18/2018 7:26:00 PM
Said my password incorrect and gave me second one..HOW remove second one?? Sorry..but Hi..was really good!
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Date: 2/18/2018 7:22:00 PM
True gem. Romantic teasing an.. artistic talent .. few wait to express. The mind I've read is the most sensual organ. Teasing body connects with teasing smile. Great Connection between them and the judges in selecting this poem. Congrats.
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Date: 2/18/2018 7:21:00 PM
True gem. Romantic teasing an.. artistic talent .. few wait to express. The mind I've read is the most sensual organ. Teasing body connects with teasing smile. Great Connection between them and the judges in selecting this poem. Congrats.
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Date: 2/18/2018 8:16:00 AM
Ah, it s such a romantic write and a really enjoyable one to read, I love reading it and congrats on your win
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Date: 2/14/2018 3:57:00 PM
I think that I love her, lol. Great job and congrats for your win, Eve.
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Date: 2/13/2018 9:44:00 PM
Eve, How did I miss this, just teasing, takes me back to my army days in Malta. How many times did I see her dancing my life away. Great write! Was this P.M. contest?
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Date: 2/13/2018 10:28:00 PM
Mick thank you for such a great compliment I couldn't ask for more.. This poem was written for Edward McCall's contest you tease me ... Hugs Eve . Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 2/11/2018 7:04:00 PM
Back with fond congrats, Eve.
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Date: 2/11/2018 3:58:00 PM
Hi Eve, what a sultry, teasing little piece you've written here. Thank you for entering it I really enjoyed it, congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/11/2018 1:32:00 PM
I'm back to say CONGRATS. Janice
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Date: 2/11/2018 11:42:00 AM
I remember her from an old dream, fond memories, congratulations Eve, well done...
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Date: 2/8/2018 7:30:00 PM
Very sexy and descriptive, Eve! Janice
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Date: 2/8/2018 5:20:00 PM
What a seductive scenario you have manifested in this sultry poem Eve, I loved it , and its a fave...Maria
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Date: 2/7/2018 8:53:00 AM
I love the flow of this sexy seduction Eve.
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Date: 2/6/2018 4:43:00 PM
Nicely done, Eve - good luck in the contest. I think I am not even trying this one, as I have no idea what to write.
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Date: 2/5/2018 9:16:00 PM
Reminds me of Rita Hayworth teasing Glen Ford in that old Gilda movie; an awesome tease for the contest Eve…Good luck in it!~Che :)
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Date: 2/5/2018 1:51:00 PM
This is very good with superb imagery that grabs you from the start and never lets go. The story is so realistically described one can feel each breath of passion. This is very good ...it pours out the emotions like a thick syrup...tantalizing and delicious! Emile.
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Date: 2/4/2018 7:32:00 PM
My goodness, Eve, this is the way I want to do it, but i was thinking the male version and in sonnet style. I keep seeing people "talking" about teasing but not showing it. From what I've seen so far, you are nailing it! I missed the contest, shucks, the one of Silent One. So that is life! Glad to see this gem tonight.
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Date: 2/4/2018 10:09:00 AM
You left me umm speechless
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Date: 2/4/2018 9:57:00 AM
Delightful poem. You captured a great scene so well, Eve.
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Date: 2/4/2018 7:27:00 AM
- This has an amazing charm, Eve :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/4/2018 6:37:00 AM
Enjoyed, Eve! GL in contest!
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