You Stole My Heart

Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, There you stole my heart and I didn't even know, Under the shade of tall trees in the green land, You looked in my blue eyes and held my hand. I think of you, though far away thousand mile, It is so hard to forget the charm of your smile, Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, There you stole my heart and I didn't even know. In my dream I saw you waiting with open arms, And I came running passing the barn and farms, Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, There you stole my heart and I didn't even know. The magic of your love has changed me so much, Sometimes falling leaves make me feel your touch, Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, There you stole my heart and I didn't even know. May 1, 2016. A First Line Prompt Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward
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Chansarkar Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Romantic and beautiful,congrats Meenakshi!
Raina Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 12:30 PM
Thank you...
Daniel Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 3:18 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win:) Nice positive poem:)
Raina Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 12:29 PM
Thank you...
Devnath  Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 12:46 PM
Congrats on your great win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Raina Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 12:56 PM
Thank you BL...
May Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Congrats on a great win Meenakshi
Raina Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Thank you..
Misra Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:36 AM
Congratulations, Meenakshi, on acing the contest.
Raina Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Thank you...
Smith Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Congratulations on your win Meenakshi...
Raina Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Thank you Charlie...
Haight Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 10:57 AM
So very beautiful, Meenakshi! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Raina Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Thank you Sandra....I am a big fan of your writing...
Ward Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations for your fine 1st place win. Your poem is emotional and exotic and a pleasure to read, Meenakshi.
Ward Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 5:53 AM
You're welcome. It's a poem for you to be proud of.
Raina Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Thank you Julia for giving this opportunity to write....and I guess I was the last one to submit my poem in the contest....I didn't want to miss it.... I had to come up with this poem in just ten minutes....glad that you liked it.
Dalei Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Hi Meenakshi, You penned very brilliantly here. Every line is enjoyable. Best wishes for the contest.A 7 from me.............with love
Raina Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 12:31 AM
Thank you...
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