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You Stole My Heart

Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, There you stole my heart and I didn't even know, Under the shade of tall trees in the green land, You looked in my blue eyes and held my hand. I think of you, though far away thousand mile, It is so hard to forget the charm of your smile, Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, There you stole my heart and I didn't even know. In my dream I saw you waiting with open arms, And I came running passing the barn and farms, Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, There you stole my heart and I didn't even know. The magic of your love has changed me so much, Sometimes falling leaves make me feel your touch, Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, There you stole my heart and I didn't even know. May 1, 2016. A First Line Prompt Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Date: 5/4/2016 9:03:00 AM
Romantic and beautiful,congrats Meenakshi!
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/8/2016 12:30:00 PM
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Date: 5/4/2016 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win:) Nice positive poem:)
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/8/2016 12:29:00 PM
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Date: 5/3/2016 12:46:00 PM
Congrats on your great win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/3/2016 12:56:00 PM
Thank you BL...
Date: 5/3/2016 12:39:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Meenakshi
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/3/2016 12:55:00 PM
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Date: 5/3/2016 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations, Meenakshi, on acing the contest.
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/3/2016 12:55:00 PM
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Date: 5/3/2016 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Meenakshi...
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/3/2016 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Charlie...
Date: 5/3/2016 10:57:00 AM
So very beautiful, Meenakshi! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/3/2016 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Sandra....I am a big fan of your writing...
Date: 5/3/2016 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations for your fine 1st place win. Your poem is emotional and exotic and a pleasure to read, Meenakshi.
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Julia Ward
Date: 5/4/2016 5:53:00 AM
You're welcome. It's a poem for you to be proud of.
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/3/2016 11:28:00 AM
Thank you Julia for giving this opportunity to write....and I guess I was the last one to submit my poem in the contest....I didn't want to miss it.... I had to come up with this poem in just ten minutes....glad that you liked it.
Date: 5/2/2016 8:28:00 AM
Hi Meenakshi, You penned very brilliantly here. Every line is enjoyable. Best wishes for the contest.A 7 from me.............with love
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/3/2016 12:31:00 AM
Thank you...

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