Jerry T Curtis Poet Rhyme

You Stink At This

Ok, That's it !
So, I clicked and read your crap
I know you think you are a poet
But, the thought just makes me laugh
I see you think that you are clever
To rhyme the way you do
But, can't you move beyond 
The Roses Red and Violets Blue
I really, really think you stink
And you REALLY wish I'd comment ?
If I have to write a kind word
I know that I would vomit
Ok, I scroll to catch your name
And I'll say, You're All The Rage
"OH CRAP! I didn't stop to notice,
I was viewing, My own page "

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Hello There September 10, 2019 at 2:54 PM So funny ~ glad to have found this today =D

Caren Krutsinger September 10, 2019 at 3:26 AM Hilariously done! Great job!

Gry Christensen September 9, 2019 at 11:08 PM Hahahaha,inqredibly funny. Love self irony, we cannot take ourself too serious.

Lim'Rik Flats February 1, 2017 at 10:16 AM Very humbleyezing! LOL funny plus a peek in the mirror:-).

Jannie Breedt December 11, 2016 at 4:48 PM Hi Jerry, I dont easily get caught but you caught us all. Its a hoot. Loved it. My first visit to you.

Anu Nayak October 6, 2016 at 11:39 AM LOL!!! loved it! very funny....this is smelling our own stink??? wonderful write, enjoyed it! Congratulations on your placement JERRY!!!!!//Love, Anu:)

John Lawless October 5, 2016 at 6:08 PM very funny Jerry, I think I've visited that page...

Beautiful Scars October 5, 2016 at 8:09 AM lollollol! Congratulations on your placement! :)-luloo

Lindsay Laurie December 22, 2015 at 11:56 PM G'day Jerry... you really have a noggin full of wit don't you, and by the way, your written work is not crap - still laughing - Lindsay Jerry T Curtis December 23, 2015 at 6:17 PM Hey Mate , Thanks, I love you're story telling almost as much as mine------ just kidding my friend--lol

Tim Smith December 15, 2015 at 2:14 PM lol....I thought you were on my page : ) Jerry T Curtis December 16, 2015 at 4:36 PM Only you would know Timmy---lol. Thanks for the visit

Mark Woods December 15, 2015 at 1:00 PM Lol. There is a serious component to this though, and I think a lot of people can be their own harshest critics. We know what we are trying to say but then start thinking OMG what have I done. Jerry T Curtis December 16, 2015 at 4:41 PM Thanks Mark, it's true, it seems the ones I like the least get the best response, and the ones I think genius----oh well---we all know what happens to those. lol

Jan Allison December 15, 2015 at 12:59 PM ha ha ha love the twist at the end Jerry:-) hugs Jan xx7 Jerry T Curtis December 16, 2015 at 4:42 PM Thanks Jan. God Bless

Lin Lane December 15, 2015 at 12:56 PM Jerry, I was ready to slap you silly until I got to the bottom...love the humor. Well done. Jerry T Curtis December 16, 2015 at 4:44 PM Hey Lin, If I ever step out of line, May you be the first to slap me silly, LOL and thanks for your comment.