Beautiful Scars Poet Tanka

You Still Surface Me

you still surface me
             like a blue tide in the sand
 immersed in your touch-
     like pebbles on the soft beach
                 engulf me with shores of thirst






Date Written: September 18, 2016

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Anisha Dutta April 11, 2017 at 8:52 PM CONGRATS Laura to win top on this wonderful five-liner. Love

Andrea Dietrich April 9, 2017 at 8:12 PM this is so beautiful. and what a nice picture you put with it, Laura. BIG congrats to you

Joseph May April 9, 2017 at 3:34 PM Congrats on a fine win Laura

Charlie Smith April 9, 2017 at 11:14 AM Lovely Tanka Laura, congratulations...

Mark Martin January 13, 2017 at 12:04 PM Beautiful! Congrats Laura! :-)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 11, 2017 at 2:56 AM Laura, Very nicely done! Congratulations on your win. :) Hugs, Dane Ann

Afzal Nusker January 11, 2017 at 2:48 AM Sublime! Congratulations on your win, Laura.

Sandra Haight January 10, 2017 at 7:20 PM Beautiful, Laura. Congratulations on our placement on this short list. Hugs, Sandra

Agnes Krampe January 10, 2017 at 6:38 PM Lovely imagery, Laura. Congrats!

Miraj Raha September 19, 2016 at 7:42 AM Oh beautiful tanka Laura,I don't know why this gem hasn't been reviewed yet. Brilliant write. Beautiful Scars September 19, 2016 at 8:50 AM thank you very much Miraj :)-luloo