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You Smell Like a Memory of the Sea Nighttime Musings

You smell like a memory of the sea
And I remember which day
You swept me off my feet, but gently
A toe still drawing
Lines in the sand

Copyright © Miriam Calleja | Year Posted 2015

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James Inman Date: 1/3/2016 9:20:00 AM Very nice, Miriam. Login to Reply Miriam Calleja Date: 1/5/2016 2:28:00 AM Thank you James!

Skat A Date: 12/29/2015 6:03:00 PM MIRIAM, Congratulations on your nice win. Enjoy the coming year..... SKAT Login to Reply Miriam Calleja Date: 1/5/2016 2:02:00 AM Thank you so much. Really flattered! Happy new year to you too!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/29/2015 1:16:00 AM Wow amazingly beautiful Miriam.. congrats on big win! Login to Reply Miriam Calleja Date: 1/5/2016 2:23:00 AM Thank you!

Susan Gentry Date: 12/28/2015 8:04:00 PM Congratulations on your win! Very well written. Login to Reply Miriam Calleja Date: 1/5/2016 2:29:00 AM Thank you Susan!

Viv Wigley Date: 12/28/2015 7:26:00 PM Beautiful little piece, Miriam, well done. Viv x Login to Reply Miriam Calleja Date: 1/5/2016 2:16:00 AM Thank you :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/28/2015 4:47:00 PM I love this. Congrats for your win. Login to Reply Miriam Calleja Date: 1/5/2016 2:13:00 AM Thank you Andrea!

John Lawless Date: 12/28/2015 3:34:00 PM WOW....what a picture....painted in imagination. Congrats on your placement in the contest Miriam. Login to Reply Miriam Calleja Date: 1/5/2016 2:11:00 AM Thank you so much John and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Paul Callus Date: 12/28/2015 2:33:00 PM Lovely; you say a lot with simple but effective words. ~ Congratulations on your fine win, Miriam! *~* Welcome to Soup & congrats on your book Pomegranate Heart. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Miriam Calleja Date: 1/5/2016 2:10:00 AM Thank you Paul! :)

Jan Allison Date: 12/28/2015 1:05:00 PM really enjoyed this Miriam congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Miriam Calleja Date: 1/5/2016 2:06:00 AM Thank you so much Jan!

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 12/11/2015 2:56:00 PM Hi Miriam, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita Login to Reply Miriam Calleja Date: 1/5/2016 2:08:00 AM wow! thank you for your encouraging words Pandita!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/10/2015 5:15:00 PM Miriam, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Miriam Calleja Date: 12/11/2015 3:45:00 AM Thanks for your message and making me feel welcome!

Skat A Date: 12/10/2015 12:12:00 PM Miriam, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Login to Reply Miriam Calleja Date: 12/11/2015 4:21:00 AM Hi there! Thanks for your welcome message. I will check out your poetry :)