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You Smell Like a Memory of the Sea Nighttime Musings

You smell like a memory of the sea
And I remember which day
You swept me off my feet, but gently
A toe still drawing
Lines in the sand

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James Inman

January 3, 2016 at 9:20 AM

Very nice, Miriam.

Miriam Calleja

January 5, 2016 at 2:28 AM

Thank you James!

Skat A

December 29, 2015 at 6:03 PM

MIRIAM, Congratulations on your nice win. Enjoy the coming year..... SKAT

Miriam Calleja

January 5, 2016 at 2:02 AM

Thank you so much. Really flattered! Happy new year to you too!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

December 29, 2015 at 1:16 AM

Wow amazingly beautiful Miriam.. congrats on big win!

Miriam Calleja

January 5, 2016 at 2:23 AM

Thank you!

Susan Gentry

December 28, 2015 at 8:04 PM

Congratulations on your win! Very well written.

Miriam Calleja

January 5, 2016 at 2:29 AM

Thank you Susan!

Viv Wigley

December 28, 2015 at 7:26 PM

Beautiful little piece, Miriam, well done. Viv x

Miriam Calleja

January 5, 2016 at 2:16 AM

Thank you :)

Andrea Dietrich

December 28, 2015 at 4:47 PM

I love this. Congrats for your win.

Miriam Calleja

January 5, 2016 at 2:13 AM

Thank you Andrea!

John Lawless

December 28, 2015 at 3:34 PM

WOW....what a picture....painted in imagination. Congrats on your placement in the contest Miriam.

Miriam Calleja

January 5, 2016 at 2:11 AM

Thank you so much John and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Paul Callus

December 28, 2015 at 2:33 PM

Lovely; you say a lot with simple but effective words. ~ Congratulations on your fine win, Miriam! *~* Welcome to Soup & congrats on your book Pomegranate Heart. ~ Regards // paul

Miriam Calleja

January 5, 2016 at 2:10 AM

Thank you Paul! :)

Jan Allison

December 28, 2015 at 1:05 PM

really enjoyed this Miriam congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Miriam Calleja

January 5, 2016 at 2:06 AM

Thank you so much Jan!

Pandita Sietesantos

December 11, 2015 at 2:56 PM

Hi Miriam, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita

Miriam Calleja

January 5, 2016 at 2:08 AM

wow! thank you for your encouraging words Pandita!

Poet Destroyer A

December 10, 2015 at 5:15 PM

Miriam, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Miriam Calleja

December 11, 2015 at 3:45 AM

Thanks for your message and making me feel welcome!

Skat A

December 10, 2015 at 12:12 PM

Miriam, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Miriam Calleja

December 11, 2015 at 4:21 AM

Hi there! Thanks for your welcome message. I will check out your poetry :)

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