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You Sing the Sweetest Songs

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With my hand clasped in yours I'm strong enough to reach the stars my love you make my world a beautiful place playing love songs on your guitar If ocean waves were stairs to the moon I'd climb each one to hear your tunes my love you sing the sweetest songs as I sway in dance like a loon chorus... And when dawn draws near I know I'll find you here ever at my side chasing away my fear I'd shout it from mountain tops across lakes and a mangrove copse my love I'd stand beside you through a thunderstorm of raindrops No sorrow shall I ever feel this love we share is for real my love you're the one I adore emotions my heart can never conceal chorus... And when dawn draws near I know I'll find you here ever at my side chasing away my fear If Winter snow covers the ground I know where you'll be found my love in my arms where you belong forever our hearts will be bound And if dawn should not arise tears would fill my eyes my love until you're in my arms I'll wake beneath grey skies Until you're in my arms my love I'll wake beneath grey skies

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/4/2017 10:06:00 PM

Nicely done :)

Lin Lane
Date: 7/5/2017 5:34:00 AM

Thank you, Debbie.

Chris Green

Date: 6/21/2017 7:10:00 AM

A beautifully romantic and heart touching love song. This is so deep with affection and emotion one can almost hear it sung as it is being read. Nicely done Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/21/2017 5:23:00 PM

Thank you so sincerely, Chris. I used to write lyrics for the music my husband wrote. Bittersweet memories.

Tim Smith

Date: 6/21/2017 6:45:00 AM

A beautiful romantic song Lin...very nice

Lin Lane
Date: 6/21/2017 5:22:00 PM

Thanks ever so much, Tim.

Madhupriya Shanmugam

Date: 6/21/2017 12:38:00 AM

If Winter snow covers the ground I know where you'll be found my love in my arms where you belong forever our hearts will be bound Beautiful lines..Enjoyed your poem:)

Lin Lane
Date: 6/21/2017 5:21:00 PM

Thanks very much, Madhupriya.

White Wolf

Date: 6/20/2017 10:26:00 PM

A wonderful lyric, Lin! If ocean waves were stairs to the moon! Love that line!

Lin Lane
Date: 6/21/2017 5:21:00 PM

Thank you, Wolf. That's one of my favorite lines, as well.

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/20/2017 9:41:00 PM

I want to hear you sing it:) I believe you've done this before. I'd chase away your tears, Peaches. This will do very well:)

Lin Lane
Date: 6/20/2017 9:43:00 PM

Thanks, Danny, but it's not entered in a contest.