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You Silence Me

You buy my silence with a fervent kiss
And hope that I forget what is amiss
You buy my silence with a gentle touch
A touch that I have longed for, oh, so much

You silence me with hungry, pleading eyes
That make my heart forget your promised lies
You silence me in passionate embrace
And rest upon my breast your angel face

You silence me with words I long to hear
A whispered breath of love, “I’m always near”
You silence me with love through fevered night
So that the wrong you’ve done fades from my sight

You silence me, but then you softly leave
And in the silence, I am left to grieve

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Seal Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 7:29 PM
This is true to life, which doesn't always play out as we would like, the existance of today produces so many relationship problems. Love the sonnet my little Desert Orchid, perfect form for this write. Take care, Richard
Manassian Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 7:38 PM
Thank you, Mr Seal, for your visit. I do like writing in sonnet form. It has become my favorite form of expression. I appreciate your visit and comment on this piece. Relationships are fraught with problems in today's world, but I believe that those which are worth fighting for, will survive.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Silence was golden until the last two lines. It appears in the end he was a fool.
Manassian Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 9:48 AM
Richard.... :) What would I do without your constant encouragement. Thank you. I loved this comment. Hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 4:56 AM
Tantalizing! Excellent erotic poem, dear Eileen!
Manassian Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 7:31 AM
Erotic, or sensual, my dear poet. I do believe this has hints of sensual....I'm glad you liked it. :)
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September 5, 2015 at 1:36 AM
Mmmm....the tempo of your romantic resilience is delectable in this fever and faint of passion's penance Beloved Poetess. Sometimes silence allows us to hear the smooth, true fire of love. Your heart be not quiet tonight. Another inspiring masterpiece from you...J.A.B.
Manassian Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 7:33 AM
Why, thank you, Justin. I'm glad you found this piece to your liking...for you have said it is a masterpiece. That brings me great joy. I'm sorry your contest has closed. I am just now working on piece for it, but when I read your poem....I thought with sadness...I am late. I will post it anyway. Be sure to read it. Hugs
Vaso Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 10:38 PM
Very touching, I would never leave you in silence, oh no, you would be making the soft sounds of pleasure!!! oh la la
Manassian Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 12:39 AM
Oh...dear...me! ;) That's some post, my dear Arthur. I'm blushing...metaphorically speaking! Thanks for the lovely visit, dear. A woman will always want to hear that she's....attractive. Hugs
Nance Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 4:53 PM
Ooh I can feel this one Eileen...There is passion, there is lust, and there is the longing when the light leaves...I know how the heart can hurt at times like those
Manassian Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 12:43 AM
:) Yes......as poets we write what is personal but also universal in a sense. Thanks for feeling this piece, my dear. Always a pleasure to have you pass by...Hugs
Smith Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 4:20 PM
I can imagine the longed for touches and kisses take away the past pain but then the leaving brings it back again. A rollercoaster of emotion. What one does for love. Have a great weekend... Tim
Manassian Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 12:44 AM
Thanks for the visit, Tim. Part of the whole situation is....I'm too needy and intense...not easy things to deal with, but....it has its +s...so, I'll be content. Thanks for the visit. Much appreciated.
United Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 4:12 PM
You silenced me with your sad words Eileen -love really does hurt sometimes - a beautiful write:-) hugs jan xx 7
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September 4, 2015 at 4:13 PM
:) Hey, you....We got to write the happy, the sad, the crazy, and the ludicrous, eh? ;) I'm just glad I could write SOMETHING. I haven't been able to write for a few days now. :) Hugs
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