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You Should Probably Get Dentures

Joann was a girl from the Heights, who loved starting all kinds of fights- kicked Pam’s butt for fun, thinking she had won, Pam liked it then found out Jo bites! So Pam clamored her eyes in fear, for her true fierceness didn’t appear- Jo leaned in to munch, then Pam threw a punch, teeth stuck on her hand were severe! In shock they both were from the stress, Jo decided to bite much less- agreed with a smile, put teeth in a pile, then both needed an ice compress! syllable count: 8-8-6-6-8 "Joann" was counted at 1 syllable, I used it as 2 howmanysyllables.com Make Me Laugh Limerick Contest Poetry Contest Tania Kitchin August 27, 2019

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Genetta Smalls

Date: 9/20/2019 3:05:00 PM

I love-ed it!!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/6/2019 9:53:00 PM

Congrats LuLoo...well done indeed!

Gary Smith

Date: 9/5/2019 11:24:00 AM

Excellent limericks Lu Loo, congrats. :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/5/2019 3:49:00 AM

Great limerick Lu Loo, congrats on your top win. Tom

Lu Loo
Date: 9/5/2019 7:02:00 AM

thank you dear Tom :)-luloo

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/4/2019 11:19:00 PM

Well penned, Lu Loo. Lots of action in top winner. Congrats.

Lu Loo
Date: 9/5/2019 7:01:00 AM

thank you lovely Line :)-luloo

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/4/2019 6:25:00 PM

Congratulations Lu Loo on your first place trophy win. I loved your limerick, it is very entertaining and hilarious and gave me a belly laugh!

Lu Loo
Date: 9/5/2019 7:01:00 AM

I am so pleased and honored sweet Tania. I did NOT expect this at all! Thank you so much, my teeth inspired this contest, even though mine have nothing to do with a bite, lol. many thanks again! Be blessed :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2019 7:12:00 PM

war of the old ladies. Nicely done, Laura Loo. Mine is so lame. I can write limericks for the meter, but I just can't think up really funny ones any more. You got creative here!!

Lu Loo
Date: 9/5/2019 7:00:00 AM

funny you said that I had a hard time with this one too. I have a hard time coming up with something funny enough, but I have problems with my teeth now and used that idea. So I am glad I did! thanks lovely lady :)-luloo

Chris Green

Date: 8/29/2019 1:14:00 PM

That was funny and a classic for sure. Love the title too. Good thing she didn't have braces, that would have really hurt. : )

Lu Loo
Date: 9/5/2019 6:59:00 AM

oh geez, braces! yes ouch, thank you dear Chris :)-luloo

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/27/2019 7:32:00 PM

Ouch...so funny and fun. A great write LuLoo! Good Luck.

Lu Loo
Date: 9/5/2019 6:58:00 AM

many thanks lovely Jeanne :)-luloo

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/27/2019 6:33:00 PM

lol this was hilarious, that's one way to get even with the bully for sure...wish i would have thought of it when a neighbor bit me hard as a child...great write my friend :) hugs

Lu Loo
Date: 9/5/2019 6:58:00 AM

oh boy, that's crazy you got bit! In Ella's preschool many a year ago there was a "biter" lol thanks sweet lady :)-luloo