You (Septet)
Oh, lover
The moonlit sky now
Shines upon your sultry smile
It makes you even more beautiful
Which I thought could not happen
As your pure beauty
Shines for me
Septet syllable count is 3,5,7,9,7,5,3, unrhymed
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