You See All

Effortless is your perusal
The barest to the deepest of my being 
Lay wide as a sailor’s map 
Before your all seeing eye 
The angel that I was to the conscious person I am 
From the wrinkles a load to lines a dot 
From fears on the hide to hopes immortal 
From cries introvert to laughs tangible
From days dismal to the ones I’m beyond the sky 
My sins that are a scar to our ‘relationship’
To my numerous surrenders at your feet 
The unworthiness that so often visits to the worthy surprises 
How weak I am to the strongest I know not to be 
Every part of me that you wonderfully made that I love-
To the one I try being my own creator  
My borehole of faults visible to eyes normal as mine 
To the darkest of secrets that seem nonexistent 

In the most crowded of places and in my solitude 
You see all and whisper-
You know who I am from who I think I am 


Contest Name: His All Seeing eye
Sponsor: Mystic Rose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/9/2015 6:25:00 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
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Date: 7/6/2015 7:00:00 AM
A wonderful poem and Yes, He do know all, He know us better than we know ourselves. Ask for the things you don't know and He will show. Beautiful Grace. You are Blessed.
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