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You Sang To Me With Every Intention

When the distractions of little things piled on my found feelings, you sang with every intention of drawing me close, out of the clutter in my mind until I heard only your voice. You had me out of my shell, ready to reach for your hand, to show me what I dared not see. But. Your courage was only for show And held up for only the glow Of the ghost of you, in the night, charmed and lost, hovering over my every mood While you go on singing of things never to come, I bored of things that never were.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/10/2010 12:02:00 PM
Misheel, congratulations on a worthy feature this week. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/8/2010 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James
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Date: 2/8/2010 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Misheel. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2010 5:45:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 2/7/2010 2:07:00 PM
Much to think about in your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. I wish you continued success. Karen
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Date: 11/9/2009 8:48:00 AM
You are very talented, love this one as well , great lines,,,,Johnathon
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Date: 11/6/2009 7:35:00 AM
Those that only do things for show don't last very long. Nicely done on the topic of no depth of character. Keep writing. Sara
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