You Said

O yes, you are right in your way of understanding
But I do not stand still under your sleuth of thinking
You said, there has no meaning to your expression
But I’m the regular flow of the words game mission

Who is a poet, who is not, what poetry is- I don’t know
But as a human being, I have feelings to write and show
You said, there were missed many things for your grip
But I find all as usual I’m, though I’m not a poet of deep

Poet and poetry are spontaneous frequency of human
Where nature and time make the insightful light of pen
O dear critic, as a human I’m there in my natural veins
Though you are bothered by my creation but I’m sane

You can criticize, encourage, someone said- you can’t discourage
I say all can discourage me constructively so that renew my phase 


March 13, 2023
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Rodrigues Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 8:22 PM
Who is a poet, who is not, what poetry is- I don’t know But as a human being, I have feelings to write and show…yes!
Bangalee Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 3:08 AM
Thanks a lot dear Poet for your kind words
Hind Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 10:41 AM
There's a lot of truth to this! Great poem!
Bangalee Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 10:20 PM
Thanks Dear poet
Turner Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 9:13 AM
a perfect response my young poet friend. May the light always shine from your pen:) Great write Mahtab. The best ones are the ones spoken in honesty and from the heart:)
Bangalee Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 10:19 PM
Thanks a lot dear poet for your great support to me always
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