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O yes, you are right in your way of understanding But I do not stand still under your sleuth of thinking You said, there has no meaning to your expression But I’m the regular flow of the words game mission Who is a poet, who is not, what poetry is- I don’t know But as a human being, I have feelings to write and show You said, there were missed many things for your grip But I find all as usual I’m, though I’m not a poet of deep Poet and poetry are spontaneous frequency of human Where nature and time make the insightful light of pen O dear critic, as a human I’m there in my natural veins Though you are bothered by my creation but I’m sane You can criticize, encourage, someone said- you can’t discourage I say all can discourage me constructively so that renew my phase March 13, 2023

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Date: 3/16/2023 8:22:00 PM
Who is a poet, who is not, what poetry is- I don’t know But as a human being, I have feelings to write and show…yes!
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 3/19/2023 3:08:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Poet for your kind words
Date: 3/15/2023 10:41:00 AM
There's a lot of truth to this! Great poem!
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 3/15/2023 10:20:00 PM
Thanks Dear poet
Date: 3/14/2023 9:13:00 AM
a perfect response my young poet friend. May the light always shine from your pen:) Great write Mahtab. The best ones are the ones spoken in honesty and from the heart:)
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 3/15/2023 10:19:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear poet for your great support to me always

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