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I smiled when you got cross with me From my room you had whipped away I knew your calm face I’d soon see I didn’t trail you on your own way. In journey on contours of life Crossed garden paths and tracks of strife Lost closeness in brief times gloomy Found ourselves afresh, you and me. You got cross with me, from my room You had whipped away, I smiled when You on your own way, I didn’t trail Your calm face I’d soon see, I knew. That was how I wished to see you Return to me always anew. September 18, 2020 Syllable count : 8 each line Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : Charonnet Sponsor : Charles Messina

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Date: 10/14/2020 12:11:00 PM
congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/13/2020 9:24:00 AM
many congrats on your win, this was a challenging form Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/13/2020 8:44:00 AM
Subimal, nice write my friend. Unfortunately your last stanza was off but this is definitely worthy of a placement. Congratulations. All the best...Charlie
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