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08.10.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- You Reap What You Sow -


   Failing fidelity
   arrogant - promise broken
   A tiara of lily of the valley
   The night with
          - deceitful moonlight
   Foxtrot is a dance for two

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Joe Maverick

October 10, 2025 at 11:35 PM

If you have loaded up with bad seed from a harvest of sin..? Turn to Jesus Open to Him.' His is the power made Strength in pure Love..The raven has Flown..On yet returns home that Dove.)

Eve Roper

October 10, 2025 at 8:02 AM

Wow, such a profound impact with this verse. Truth to be told. Like the verse. Hugs eve

sara Etgen-Baker

October 9, 2025 at 6:29 PM

beautiful imagery Anne-Lise. Especially liked 'decitful moonlight' Well done contest entry, hugs, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

October 9, 2025 at 12:03 PM

A well written poem highlighting human character. Those arrogant ones. There comes a day when they will rely on someone too.

Krishika Upadhyay

October 9, 2025 at 10:04 AM

I like the way each line feels like a snapshot. The mix of imagery and emotion makes it feel thoughtful and layered.

Kim Rodrigues

October 9, 2025 at 10:04 AM

Never produces a good thing, makes life difficult and stressful. I feel for marriages that were not good, but God’s way is the best and produces the greatest fruit.

Sara Kendrick

October 9, 2025 at 7:02 AM

I agree. Infidelity breaks a person's trust in that person, and it is very hard to repair. Sara K

Sotto Poet

October 9, 2025 at 4:07 AM

Deeply moving and memorable. I truly appreciate the depth of feelings and vivid imagery you've managed to convey in such a brief format, Anne-Lise.

Victor Buhagiar

October 9, 2025 at 1:28 AM

What a poem. There's imagery and metaphor. Great write.

Andrea Dietrich

October 8, 2025 at 8:22 PM

Love the imagery here

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 8, 2025 at 11:55 AM

Hello Sunshine smile yes the foxtrot is for two. A hard dance to learn i am told. Hugs. Darlene/

Daniel Henry Rodgers

October 8, 2025 at 11:44 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, incredibly evocative and haunting. I absolutely love how much emotion and narrative you packed into such a concise space. Oh, the sorry of broken promises. Autumn Blessings, Dear Anne-Lise, Daniel

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