You Played Me

Running your fingers
over my delicately tuned form.
Blind. - You know which keys to press.
To enhance sweet music  from me.
Happily and playfully,
my white notes singing love.
The darker side brings juxtaposed
moods and sadness,
pedalling drama and bitterness.
You know just how to play me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 6:43 PM
this was one I had faved and still I was the only one to comment. GEEEZ, it is so awesome.
Docherty Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 4:11 AM
Thanks so much Andrea, and to be one of your favs too makes writing more encouraging... Appreciate your viewing as ever... Sometimes when poetry has not been commented on at all you wonder it you are pitching/getting it right... or if its all a terrible mistake...
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 3:15 PM
oooooh, very very good one. A FAV
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