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You Plant Me

Plant me like a red rose in your heart Keep me alive there never loose spark When you speak may words deliver me In love to trust what you are saying Kiss my spirit with your thoughts Transcending touch to bring lavender love Fill me like an exotic tea kettle And drink me in your thirst forever Smile with your eyes when you hear my name Find a grin in mine at the thought of you Dance with me despite my two left fuchsia feet When I am gone make love to my memory I love how we are so close That even in dark I know Just who you are inside and out You are my soulmate find in me your house.

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 12/21/2023 8:55:00 PM

Smooth lovely very nice romance! A favorite..

Karen Jones
Date: 12/21/2023 9:14:00 PM

Thanks for reading Abdullah. I am honored it is a favorite!

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/21/2023 5:45:00 PM

This is excellent Karen . I was moved by it as I was reading :)

Karen Jones
Date: 12/21/2023 6:06:00 PM

Really Heidi? Thank you for sharing and reading. Happy holidays and hugs!

Silent One

Date: 12/21/2023 12:13:00 PM

Hey Karen.. I hope its getting easier for you to choose a soulmate.. This heartfelt poem beautifully encapsulates the essence of deep and enduring love, weaving together vivid metaphors and tender emotions. The imagery of being planted like a red rose in the heart immediately sets a romantic tone, symbolizing not just a connection but a nurturing and blossoming love. The idea of never losing spark in the heart speaks to the eternal nature of the emotions being expressed...

Karen Jones
Date: 12/21/2023 12:40:00 PM

It's getting easier because I am letting go and letting God Silent One. I decided to just feel and write and let it bloom. I love that you understand my poetry and you humble me with your words. I almost feel it isn't poetry as it is just my life. Lol Thanks for reading and happy holidays. Hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/21/2023 11:49:00 AM

The profound depth and stirring essence of your opening lines have utterly enthralled me, Karen, this is a great poem worth a POTD.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/21/2023 12:36:00 PM

Oh wow! That's really kind of you Sotto Poet. I appreciate that. Hope your holiday is blessed and new year happy and healthy.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/21/2023 8:37:00 AM

Gosh this poem made me breathless really! How heartfelt and soul stirring it isn one of my faves ever from you dear karen! Really. Especially those opening lines got me all captivated! Sigh! Pleasure reading you.. sending you light always

Karen Jones
Date: 12/21/2023 9:47:00 AM

Oh wow Ink Empress. So sweet are you to say. I thought it belonged in my poem cemetery! I struggled with form. Thank you for liking it! Love and light hugs to you!