You Never Learn-Scars Left Behind

Dad is pushing up daisies today. He did away with himself on New Year’s Day. He lodged a bullet into his own chest. Less than a week later, he was laid to rest. Down to Atlantic City, you and Mom would roam. All our depressed father could do was stay home. You desired to dump more money in a casino. Dad pleaded with you not to go. What a horrible scene you witnessed with your eyes. Our father fashioned his very own demise. Of course, you were filled with regret. However, you too easily disregard and forget. Even that didn’t stop you from losing your money. Do you think destroying yourself is funny? Robert Pettit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Williams Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 11:23 AM
Robert belated congrats on what I can only assume was a very difficult one to write....David
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February 10, 2013 at 10:01 AM
!!!
Ryerson Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 3:58 AM
Powerful and devestating, Robert...congratulatons to you sir - Tim
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February 7, 2013 at 10:55 AM
Robert, Congratulations with your wonderful and awesome winning poem... always~ LINDA
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 10:15 AM
Belated Conrats on your top spot Robert xx
Guzzi Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 6:56 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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February 5, 2013 at 6:48 PM
Wow! Very sad indeed. Congrats on win.
Kovrlija Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 12:35 AM
So sad ans so well- written.
Dome Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 2:13 PM
Very sad friend, I'm so sorry. Heartfelt best wishes. Pete.
Horne Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 12:33 PM
very powerful write on this tragedy
Bauer Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 10:51 AM
very sad but powerfully written! writing is a great way to vent and you've done it masterfully here...
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