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Paul Gauguin

In the small verdant village of Kora-Kay Live peaceful folk who fish, eat and play At sunset they dance around drum circles and sing Of yesteryears’ joys and what tomorrow may bring The words fame and fortune are never needed As their bounty—food and friends—cannot be exceeded At death, forever with loved ones they’ll dwell Knowing of heaven but nothing of hell One night a group of strange men wander in Their translator tells them all about sin There will be no family to greet them up in the sky Only hell if they believe their own heathen lie In hell they will burn in eternal flame For their unrepentant, filthy, naked shame! They will scream in torment, their pleas unheard If they do not immediately accept the word Each child cries and runs to their wailing mother As elders give despairing looks to each other Kora-Kay’s chief strolls in to solemnly say We are a welcoming people, but you must go away In the small verdant village of Kora-Kay Dwells a peaceful folk who fish, eat and play Written 5/29/22 Your Favourite Poem From The First Half Of 2022 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Date: 6/7/2022 7:51:00 AM
Truly wonderful verse and presentation of true innocence. This world cares not for such as its goal is to diminish, conquer and enslave the lost soul, imho. A fav and a true gem too. God bless.
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Date: 5/31/2022 8:18:00 PM
Such a lovely tale of simple folks who live in Arcadian bliss ! Why should people inject fear of torment into their heads? Let them live and die in peace.... I wish I could be with them to enjoy their peaceful existence, at least for a while..... ! Really enjoyed your poem, Robert!
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/1/2022 10:27:00 AM
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed, I agree with you, absolutely Valsa. Robert
Date: 5/30/2022 4:32:00 PM
You know how they say that Joe 'posterized' Shmoe with a thundering dunk in basketball these days? Well, here's to him who 'missionized' those unwelcome outside emissaries! Nice write, Robert!
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 5/30/2022 6:45:00 PM
Thanks for the analogy, Gershon, I'm humbled. Robert
Date: 5/29/2022 12:14:00 PM
Yes! Yes! For a long time now I've had serious reservations about the missionary effort. I highly recommend a movie "At Play in the Fields of the Lord." On a mission trip to Tanzania, an elderly gentleman told me they already knew about God, but he appreciated learning the story of God's son. I learned a lot from his statement.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 5/30/2022 6:48:00 PM
Your experience sounds fascinating, have you written about these stories? I appreciate the comment, Milt. Robert

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