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You Must Feel Him

I've seen the goodness of the Lord and the lamb slaughtered by the sword. And wonder what Man's future holds when God's commandments are ignored. As Man's chosen pathway unfolds, science establishes strongholds. And Almighty God's a fable that only the Bible upholds. Jesus was born in a stable, but Man hordes all that He's able. And He has no desire to share He's both greedy and unstable. Many argue God isn't there, and if He is, He's just not fair. For they believe we're all alone, there's no God, or He doesn't care. You won't find God on any throne your heart's where He'll make Himself known. For God is love; you must feel Him, it's through your actions that He's shown. (Interlocking Rubáiyát) Mar.2, 2018
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Salehi Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 1:52 AM
God is love indeed. Your style of Rubaiyat is perfectly correct. It convey your message throughout. My message is slightly different in Butcher's knife, That is also rubayiat
Pinet Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Thanks so much Pashang, your support is appreciated my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 5:21 PM
Awesome message. "It's through your actions, He is shown" Superb poem, Emile. Love it.
Pinet Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 5:37 PM
Thanks so much Line, your support is invaluable my friend, Emile.
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