You Must Feel Him

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I've seen the goodness of the Lord and the lamb slaughtered by the sword. And wonder what Man's future holds when God's commandments are ignored. As Man's chosen pathway unfolds, science establishes strongholds. And Almighty God's a fable that only the Bible upholds. Jesus was born in a stable, but Man hordes all that He's able. And He has no desire to share He's both greedy and unstable. Many argue God isn't there, and if He is, He's just not fair. For they believe we're all alone, there's no God, or He doesn't care. You won't find God on any throne your heart's where He'll make Himself known. For God is love; you must feel Him, it's through your actions that He's shown. (Interlocking Rubáiyát) Mar.2, 2018

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/15/2018 1:52:00 AM

God is love indeed. Your style of Rubaiyat is perfectly correct. It convey your message throughout. My message is slightly different in Butcher's knife, That is also rubayiat

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/15/2018 8:36:00 AM

Thanks so much Pashang, your support is appreciated my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/2/2018 5:21:00 PM

Awesome message. "It's through your actions, He is shown" Superb poem, Emile. Love it.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/2/2018 5:37:00 PM

Thanks so much Line, your support is invaluable my friend, Emile.