Pamela Angela Poet I do not know?

You Make Me So! So! So!

I sit still and thoughts of you make me so! so!so! wet
Laughter smiles inside my once burden mystic mind
And yet today is with joy, I can think so! so! so! 

Unwrap these shadows of faded vision I seek 
My reality creeps aimlessly I am happy to say so! so!so!
Chuckled to myself reminiscing my inner glows
turns on and on and I shout so! so!so!

Only the deep see my comprehensions of
Love, laughter, happiness, passion and yes fear too
I live my life with no regrets and I say 
so! so! so!

©Pamela creary PAC 2008

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Poet Destroyer A February 7, 2016 at 10:28 PM AWESOME

Christopher Higgins December 4, 2008 at 9:41 AM Lovede the usage of the so, so in the poem. The message is strong, filled with desire and longing. Loving your style.

Derrick Burton December 3, 2008 at 7:22 PM everys right this poem is good with a great flow. thank you for sharing with us.

Michael Romero December 1, 2008 at 2:29 PM oh, so! so! so! good I realy liked this write looking forward to reading more of your work, keep on writing on.

Joseph Spence Sr November 29, 2008 at 6:47 PM This is excellent. I like the flow of the words and the message. I can see warm images in this one. Welcome to Poetry Soup and great job! ~Joseph