You Made Me

You made me a poet,
Whose poems are often found to be filled with your imaginations.
You made me a thinker,
Whose thoughts generally arise by your delusions.

You have changed me, mere from a person to a personality.
A company with you, makes me nowhere in world to any others view.

You made me a criticizer,
Whose critical views are for his own life (without you).
You made me a photographer,
Whose eyes capture only the face of yours.

You have brought a desire,
A desire of you only and rest be in fire.
A walk with you,
Makes me to run on to the heaven and dew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Flower Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 11:53 AM
Sweet poem! I love the last line.
Valmiki Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 12:09 AM
thank you!
Williams Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 6:01 AM
hey Amit nicely penned love story, thanks for your comments..David
Hales Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 9:24 AM
enjoyed this ...sarah x
Sanders Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 7:48 PM
very good poetry
Hanson Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 8:59 AM
Loved it
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