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You Made Me

You made me a poet, Whose poems are often found to be filled with your imaginations. You made me a thinker, Whose thoughts generally arise by your delusions. You have changed me, mere from a person to a personality. A company with you, makes me nowhere in world to any others view. You made me a criticizer, Whose critical views are for his own life (without you). You made me a photographer, Whose eyes capture only the face of yours. You have brought a desire, A desire of you only and rest be in fire. A walk with you, Makes me to run on to the heaven and dew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/20/2012 11:53:00 AM
Sweet poem! I love the last line.
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Amit Valmiki
Date: 2/21/2012 12:09:00 AM
thank you!
Date: 9/12/2011 6:01:00 AM
hey Amit nicely penned love story, thanks for your comments..David
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Date: 9/8/2011 9:24:00 AM
enjoyed this ...sarah x
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Date: 9/7/2011 7:48:00 PM
very good poetry
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:59:00 AM
Loved it
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