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You Loved

YOU LOVED
                               You loved
                                me most.
                                 I won’t 
                                 want to
                                 hurt you.
                                 
                                  No way,
                                   I left.
                                   My heart
                                   yearned for
                                   else one.

                                  We two 
                                    lovers
                                    wedded.
                                   One year 
                                   just passed.
                                    Deceived.

                                     I left,
                                    searched for,
                                     wept for
                                      in vain
                                       to get
                                        back you.

                                         I wish
                                          to love
                                          you, Dear!

  Two Syllables per line      First Place

          12/08/16

     Duplex Contest by Jan Allison

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Date: 12/11/2016 9:57:00 AM
Great poem on a difficult contest! Congrats! :-)
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Date: 12/11/2016 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement ...
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Date: 12/11/2016 4:57:00 AM
Hi Anisha, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/10/2016 11:55:00 PM
Anisha, Congratulations! Great duplex :)
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Date: 12/10/2016 8:02:00 PM
Hi Anisha, congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/10/2016 7:53:00 PM
Congrats, Anisha.
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Date: 12/10/2016 6:28:00 PM
Many congrats on your top spot Anisha - I had asked for the title to be Duplex but didn't penalise you for this as the poem was good:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2016 1:18:00 PM
Oh. A heart in bleeding. nice write.
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