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you love your car

. but i love my tap tap tap almost tapped out machine I meant pencil yes I did

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2024 12:43:00 PM

cute one, James. I think you meant tapped instead of taped. Are you up for a St. Patrick's Day poem, with elves or whatever? I just don't know enough about nymths of eastern U.S.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/5/2024 1:04:00 PM

well i thought nymphs belonging to a tree were dryads. Still they are beautiful young women, not men. So if you want to start off the poem, I'll try to respond to it in Soupmail. I have written 3 dryad poems in my time. I still think elves and lephrachauns for St. Patrick Day would be easier to do.

James Peranteau
Date: 3/5/2024 12:57:00 PM

Well, I thank you Andrea for the correction tape...dryads are dope hon, look them up and let me know you did so...oh...dryads are where any woodz are...will have fun with this; mine eccentric promise ') c yah