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You Looked Back

And there was I, In a hazy dream world, Before me - Reds, blues, blacks and browns, Suede, leather, other materials, Heels, flats and wedges. I departed, A movement caught my eye, A turning round, I glanced up… You had turned round, You looked back, To see me? To see if I saw you? I smiled, A brief exchange of words. I was almost dazed, The moment ended, You walked on, And now I ponder… You looked back.

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Date: 4/1/2010 10:05:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Elaine. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2010 3:25:00 PM
Encounter in the clothing store? Really nice read! Luv, andrea
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Date: 3/31/2010 12:38:00 PM
Enjoyable poem Elaine, i can picture the two >> James
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