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You Let Go a Big Blast

Has this ever happened to you While bending down to tie up your shoe You let go a big fella Destroying the credenza Bump your head and you don't know who's who © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/22/2015 6:26:00 PM

too funny dear!!! "Destroying the credenza" love that line! : D Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/22/2015 7:15:00 PM

LOL Silly man!!!! Love ya, dear Laura! xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/22/2015 10:14:00 AM

Miles apart... but sooo much alike... LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/22/2015 10:22:00 AM

You don't do that do you??? LOL xxxx

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2015 7:03:00 AM

I think it must be a man thing Jack as its never happens to me - lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/22/2015 7:12:00 AM

NEVER - you simply clench your buttocks lol-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/22/2015 7:10:00 AM

NEVER??? LOL Lovesies, Jack xxx