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Breathless Contest

Sponsor Constance La France
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“I'm right here. We're right here. I can't tell you what the point of this is except that I'm so happy I met you, and I can't tell you what's going to happen... But I do know that right now, in this moment, on this island, I'm where I'm supposed to be, and that's with you.” jennifer niven, I cannot bear to look deep into your eyes, Shimmering, laughing green that’s so enchanting. Why do they leave me breathless and provocative? I cannot help but whisper that I love her. Can she feel the ethereal emotions between us? We walk hand in hand, our hands so warm. My mind singing some lovely love song. Until my lips whisper the self-same lullaby That fills my heart with uncontrolled emotions. It is a delicate dance between euphoria and vulnerability. A fleeting moment as two hands in love gain in warmth, My heart pounding, I feel that tender, gentle pressure, Then a glance, our silver smiles so aglow, A fleeting moment and I am lost, possessed, As love can be an all-encompassing force. Yes. you leave me in an excruciating emotion, You overfill my heart with endless light. You are my sunrise and sunset all in one. You are both my day and night. Can you understand why you leave me breathless? Placed 1

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Date: 5/29/2025 9:16:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "You Leave Me Breathless" write again. Have a blessed day with your win.............
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Date: 5/27/2025 6:34:00 PM
' my lips whisper the self-same lullaby. ' This thought is so sensual and inviting. Congratulations on placing first in the contest, Victor. Your thoughts are beautiful, romantic and simply breathtaking. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 5/27/2025 4:40:00 AM
- Back with a congrats, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 5/26/2025 12:52:00 PM
Victor, a delightful romantic poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/26/2025 5:01:00 AM
Dearest Victor, there's such a gentle charm and romantic honesty in this poem of yours—it flows like a soft breeze on a quiet evening. I could feel the tenderness in every line, especially that delicate balance between vulnerability and euphoria. Beautiful and a fave ...Hugs
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 5/26/2025 10:53:00 AM
Tell me when you posted it and the name, please.
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Maria Williams
Date: 5/26/2025 5:01:00 AM
I'm posting a video tonight, hope you like it.
Date: 5/26/2025 4:15:00 AM
Ahhh!! So romantic. I can tell you have experienced love at some point in your life. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 5/25/2025 9:22:00 PM
Wonderful entry for the contest.... ! What powerful emotions of love sweep through your breast making you breathless! "A fleeting moment and I am lost, possessed, As love can be an all-encompassing force." Indeed you have made us feel that love is an encompassing force. All the Best dear Victor
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Date: 5/25/2025 8:16:00 PM
So beautiful,enchanting,natural.I love this poem.
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Date: 5/25/2025 6:27:00 PM
Very nicely penned Victor
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Date: 5/25/2025 6:18:00 PM
Victor, your well wrought poem is delightfully romantic! I love the final verse, especially. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Date: 5/25/2025 12:38:00 PM
Hello Victor, this is a beautifully romantic write. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 5/25/2025 10:14:00 AM
So many romantic lines in your poem of love and romance... you do this genre so well... always creating imagery and loving language...
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Date: 5/25/2025 7:45:00 AM
How romantic and beautiful dear victor! I wanted to write for this contest but i doubt i will have time, however i must praise your well woven poem that emanates such passionate and heartfelt emotions! I especially love “You are my sunrise and sunset all in one. You are both my day and night. Can you understand why you leave me breathless?l what a way to describe love that leaves one breathless! Pleasure reading this gem! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Date: 5/25/2025 4:28:00 AM
- Falling in love and these powerful feelings can leave anyone breathless ... a beautiful poem for the contest, Victor :) - Best wishes :) - hugs
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Date: 5/25/2025 1:22:00 AM
You are such a romantic and to be a poet in addition to that really enhances the gifts from your pen. Love, romantic and heart deep, palpitates in this poem. I wish I knew who Jennifer Niven is and where she said the words you quoted, an actress, a movie? I'm clueless. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 5/24/2025 10:23:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "You Leave Me Breathless" write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away..........
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