You Know the People I Mean

They look through me never really see me
Without a shred of decency choosing to avoid me
Their disdainful stare turning to a glare 
Offer their backs to me without a care

It would never occur to them to smile
Would never go that extra mile
Can their heart really be that stone cold
To be so stingy as to a smile withhold
Hoping but for a cordial hello
Not like asking for a hearty laugh bellow

Why are some so miserably irate
Are they really so bursting with hate
Don’t they see they write their own fate
With cloudy gloom and moody skies
How unfortunate not to use their eyes
And realize how blessed they truly are
Each new day, should thank their lucky star
I wonder what they can possibly gain
To carry and spread such misery and pain
Why do they fear to show compassion
Since when is a frown acceptable fashion
They sport a burden they need not share
Can they not reach inside and find a way to care



AP: 1st place 2020

Submitted for contest JUDGMENTAL PEOPLE AND HATERS sponsored by BRENDA CHIRI - November 8, 2017  -  RANKED 4TH
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Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 8:11 PM
This one was wonderfully written, Line. I am finding so many treasures of yours here at Soup on the Best List. One more page to go. Sorry I have to stop now. Later, gator!!!
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 8:58 PM
LOL thank you for reading my oldies, Andrea.
Roper Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 8:47 PM
Line, nicely done congratulations on your win hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 10:04 PM
Thank you, Eve. Much appreciated.
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December 12, 2017 at 1:32 PM
An emotive tender pen Line, congratulations xomo!
Gauthier Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 10:03 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen.
Tripp Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations, Dear
Gauthier Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 12:28 PM
Thank you, Rhoda.
Lindley Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 5:06 PM
I LOVE YOUR WONDERFUL VERSES MY FRIEND. Congratulations on your win in BRENDA'S HATERS CONTEST!!!
Gauthier Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Thank you, Robert. I really appreciate your feedback.
Thirtyseven Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 6:31 AM
"Since when is a frown..." Love that line. Best of luck in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Thanks, Scott. I appreciate your visit and your taking the time to leave me a comment. Good day !!
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