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You In Mine

Your reflection is on the side of my heart... I only see it when I'm alone and in the dark... At times I can't breathe and I stretch for some air... Gasping and swallowing fear and endless despair... Through a past of drowning outside of discolored reality... To falling into the cracks of hope and sense ability.... That reflection still stands the test of time... For there is always a piece of you in mine...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 3:39:00 PM

ha ha..Love the Santa Michael, ... comemnt... pd

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/8/2012 11:15:00 PM

I'm cooking meat for my restaurant tomorrow morning... i have to take care of it... I'm not tired...i think...I'm gonna pull 24 hour on the soup....lol... JK....i'm headed home in an hour...xox~pd

Dinda Minardi

Date: 10/27/2012 9:23:00 AM

Awww, the last stanza really knocked me out, Michael. A very good way to put on my feeling rite now :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/19/2012 7:45:00 AM

Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Michael. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/17/2012 6:23:00 PM

Soup mail XXOO

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/16/2012 2:06:00 PM

Sad but beautiful...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/8/2012 10:09:00 PM

Michael, everything about your poem, is heaven-sent. I do not know how you do it,.. You are like Mr. Robert H.. you never seem to run out of imagery and poet lines. your poem is a darling piece of work, heartfelt on the last line... xox~pd

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/30/2012 11:02:00 AM

A lovely gem, embracing all that makes you, you! Especially love the ending MJF, hope you are enjoying your day on the Golf course ;) love CTH

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/28/2012 5:53:00 PM

Micheal; this really touches the heart. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/26/2012 10:20:00 AM

wonderful Michael, such elegants...

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 9/26/2012 8:00:00 AM

wow..very touching Mike..luv it...beautiful..luv it <3<3<3 :)) SK

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/26/2012 12:43:00 AM

So touching and deep. Loved it.

Kash Poet

Date: 9/25/2012 6:42:00 PM

Beautiful poem here Michael!Enjoyed reading it.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/25/2012 4:39:00 PM

Wow, what a fascinating and powerful poem this is my friend! I am in awe with this incredible nature of this write! I really enjoyed your intriguing and soulful poem Michael! What a masterful piece, Great Work!!

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/25/2012 4:49:00 PM

Russell your comments are the cool drink at the end of my day. MJF

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2012 3:39:00 PM

So beautiful written Michael!! oxox Anne-Lise :)

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/25/2012 3:43:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise!! Your words are too kind. Now give that guy next to you a big hug from me for that amazing dedication that floored me. xoxo Michael

James Fraser

Date: 9/25/2012 3:36:00 PM

Simply delightful Michael :)

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/25/2012 3:37:00 PM

Thanks James. Coming from you that means a lot. MJF