You Have All of Me

We've been in love in mysterious ways,
It moves us closer 'til heavenly place.
We both surrendered in each other arms.
Shared the precious moment like no one could divide.

Some time we can't help not to fight.
Break one's heart then torn apart.
But deep inside us is a love we can not hide.
And stay together 'til the morning shines.

Nothing seems perfect when love is new.
As it gets older, it changed its hue.
Patience and forgiveness, a heart that's pure.
All we need to stay longer in this affair.

No matter how hard our love will  face.
You're the only one I rest my heart with.
That made us stronger, a better lover.
Let us hold the promise of staying in love forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/5/2014 4:57:00 PM
aww. staying in love is a lot of work but it pays off in the end. well said :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/6/2014 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, CAsarah!!! :O))
Date: 3/30/2014 2:12:00 AM
Pure devotion, clear love, this is a beautiful poem. J.A.B.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/6/2014 9:28:00 AM
Thanks a lot, JAB!!! :O)))
Date: 3/28/2014 4:13:00 PM
This Is A Very Beautiful Love Song! Bravo, And Thank You For Your Kind Visit ... Yours Truly, Jeremy
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/6/2014 9:28:00 AM
Thank you, Jeremy.. xoxo
Date: 3/26/2014 8:53:00 AM
This is a deeply & honest poem. Though, admittedly, the "stabbed each back" line makes me wonder if that's what love should be like. In any case, this was a terrific write! :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/26/2014 1:51:00 PM
oh thank you Drake for dropping by and leaving my poem this wonderful insights....about the "back stabbing"... i just used it to exaggerate the way a couples used to fight...into that extent in some ways.... Thank you!!! ...this is unexpected visit from the most famous personality... my honor, DJ Eszes!! ^_^
Date: 3/26/2014 1:10:00 AM
Hi Aiyah, no wonder the ad's on this page are candy... I kid you not!... This poem's so so so sweet... A little fight, sometimes leads to a good good morning... You discovered love perfectly... always~ Linda
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/26/2014 7:43:00 AM
Hey PD.. nice to see your comment again on my poem...my pleasure..lol... thanks that you liked it!!! ..it's always a happiness for my heart to see you commenting... Love you and your poems always!! ..here's a hugs... !!! :o))
Date: 3/25/2014 7:21:00 PM
Loved this, when you get older with that Love, you've earned life's respect. Great write AiyaH
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/26/2014 7:50:00 AM
Thank you ,Tiaua!! (cute name:')....I appreciate your visit and comment on my poem... I'll check yours later!! ..Have a great day!! ^__^
Date: 3/25/2014 4:28:00 PM
romantic...honestly expressed. positive message. // paul
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/26/2014 8:40:00 AM
Hi Paul... Thank you for your kind words.. !! ^__^
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