You Have All of Me

We've been in love in mysterious ways,
It moves us closer 'til heavenly place.
We both surrendered in each other arms.
Shared the precious moment like no one could divide.

Some time we can't help not to fight.
Break one's heart then torn apart.
But deep inside us is a love we can not hide.
And stay together 'til the morning shines.

Nothing seems perfect when love is new.
As it gets older, it changed its hue.
Patience and forgiveness, a heart that's pure.
All we need to stay longer in this affair.

No matter how hard our love will  face.
You're the only one I rest my heart with.
That made us stronger, a better lover.
Let us hold the promise of staying in love forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 4:57 PM
aww. staying in love is a lot of work but it pays off in the end. well said :)
Torres Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 9:29 AM
Thank you, CAsarah!!! :O))
Bordner Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 2:12 AM
Pure devotion, clear love, this is a beautiful poem. J.A.B.
Torres Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 9:28 AM
Thanks a lot, JAB!!! :O)))
Street Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 4:13 PM
This Is A Very Beautiful Love Song! Bravo, And Thank You For Your Kind Visit ... Yours Truly, Jeremy
Torres Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 9:28 AM
Thank you, Jeremy.. xoxo
Tacito Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 8:53 AM
This is a deeply & honest poem. Though, admittedly, the "stabbed each back" line makes me wonder if that's what love should be like. In any case, this was a terrific write! :)
Torres Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 1:51 PM
oh thank you Drake for dropping by and leaving my poem this wonderful insights....about the "back stabbing"... i just used it to exaggerate the way a couples used to fight...into that extent in some ways.... Thank you!!! ...this is unexpected visit from the most famous personality... my honor, DJ Eszes!! ^_^
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March 26, 2014 at 1:10 AM
Hi Aiyah, no wonder the ad's on this page are candy... I kid you not!... This poem's so so so sweet... A little fight, sometimes leads to a good good morning... You discovered love perfectly... always~ Linda
Torres Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 7:43 AM
Hey PD.. nice to see your comment again on my poem...my pleasure..lol... thanks that you liked it!!! ..it's always a happiness for my heart to see you commenting... Love you and your poems always!! ..here's a hugs... !!! :o))
Ioane Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 7:21 PM
Loved this, when you get older with that Love, you've earned life's respect. Great write AiyaH
Torres Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Thank you ,Tiaua!! (cute name:')....I appreciate your visit and comment on my poem... I'll check yours later!! ..Have a great day!! ^__^
Callus Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 4:28 PM
romantic...honestly expressed. positive message. // paul
Torres Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 8:40 AM
Hi Paul... Thank you for your kind words.. !! ^__^
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