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You Haunt My Mind

I am stranded on this beautiful isle, but you're not here. Thoughts of you haunt my mind Grief entwines me with chains that crush my heart. I am a castaway without your smile. September 24, 2020 ~ Double Tetractys 3 Sponsored by: Eve Roper ~ Photo #4

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Date: 10/2/2020 6:33:00 PM
Poignant metaphors shine in this beautiful gem, Jenna. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your exquisite poem.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/2/2020 2:44:00 PM
Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Jenna. I love the theme in your," You Haunt My Mind'', it has great imagery, and flow. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"
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Date: 10/2/2020 11:12:00 AM
Great reflection shape on the page. Good work. Way to go with your win. Sara..Thanks for stopping by with congrats.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 12:48:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara, and you're welcome for my visit to your poem.
Date: 10/2/2020 7:41:00 AM
- Congratulations on your first place in the contest, Jenna :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 12:47:00 PM
Thanks a whole lot, Anne-Lise. I always appreciate your kindness and wishes. Enjoy your weekend, too!
Date: 10/2/2020 7:15:00 AM
Returning your congratulations and wish you the best for your high placement. ~~
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 12:47:00 PM
Thank you so sincerely, Victor.
Date: 10/2/2020 6:13:00 AM
Such a sweet poem Jenna! lovely!! Congrats on your win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 6:56:00 AM
Thanks an awful lot, Krish.
Date: 10/2/2020 5:43:00 AM
This is beautiful Jenna. A worthy win! Congratulations! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 6:56:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Linda.
Date: 9/24/2020 2:41:00 PM
Such a lovely piece Jenna, love especially love your last line! Blessings, Gordon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2020 3:46:00 PM
Thanks ever so kindly, Gordon.
Date: 9/24/2020 10:56:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Jenna ... I hope she finds the one she is looking for :) - Best wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2020 3:46:00 PM
Thanks for the sunshine thoughts, Anne-Lise.
Date: 9/24/2020 9:06:00 AM
This is a beauty, dear lady. I enjoyed it and know it is a sure winner. Love to you and blessings too, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2020 3:45:00 PM
Thank you very much, Regina.
Date: 9/24/2020 8:19:00 AM
beautiful but sad Jenna i would hate to be stranded and totally cut off from those i love. good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2020 3:45:00 PM
How terribly lonely that would be. Thanks, Jan.

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