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You Haunt My Mind

I am stranded on this beautiful isle,
but you're not here.
Thoughts of you
haunt my
mind 
Grief
entwines
 me with chains 
that crush my heart.
I am a castaway without your smile.



September 24, 2020 ~ Double Tetractys 3 
Sponsored by:  Eve Roper ~ Photo #4

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Susan Ashley Date: 10/2/2020 6:33:00 PM Poignant metaphors shine in this beautiful gem, Jenna. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your exquisite poem.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 10/2/2020 2:44:00 PM Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Jenna. I love the theme in your," You Haunt My Mind'', it has great imagery, and flow. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve" Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/2/2020 11:12:00 AM Great reflection shape on the page. Good work. Way to go with your win. Sara..Thanks for stopping by with congrats. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/2/2020 12:48:00 PM Thanks so much, Sara, and you're welcome for my visit to your poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/2/2020 7:41:00 AM - Congratulations on your first place in the contest, Jenna :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/2/2020 12:47:00 PM Thanks a whole lot, Anne-Lise. I always appreciate your kindness and wishes. Enjoy your weekend, too!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/2/2020 7:15:00 AM Returning your congratulations and wish you the best for your high placement. ~~ Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/2/2020 12:47:00 PM Thank you so sincerely, Victor.

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 10/2/2020 6:13:00 AM Such a sweet poem Jenna! lovely!! Congrats on your win! Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/2/2020 6:56:00 AM Thanks an awful lot, Krish.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/2/2020 5:43:00 AM This is beautiful Jenna. A worthy win! Congratulations! Linda Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/2/2020 6:56:00 AM Thank you so very much, Linda.

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 9/24/2020 2:41:00 PM Such a lovely piece Jenna, love especially love your last line! Blessings, Gordon Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 9/24/2020 3:46:00 PM Thanks ever so kindly, Gordon.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2020 10:56:00 AM - A lovely poem, Jenna ... I hope she finds the one she is looking for :) - Best wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 9/24/2020 3:46:00 PM Thanks for the sunshine thoughts, Anne-Lise.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 9/24/2020 9:06:00 AM This is a beauty, dear lady. I enjoyed it and know it is a sure winner. Love to you and blessings too, Gina Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 9/24/2020 3:45:00 PM Thank you very much, Regina.

Jan Allison Date: 9/24/2020 8:19:00 AM beautiful but sad Jenna i would hate to be stranded and totally cut off from those i love. good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 9/24/2020 3:45:00 PM How terribly lonely that would be. Thanks, Jan.