Jenna Logan Poet Tetractys

You Haunt My Mind

I am stranded on this beautiful isle,
but you're not here.
Thoughts of you
haunt my
mind 
Grief
entwines
 me with chains 
that crush my heart.
I am a castaway without your smile.



September 24, 2020 ~ Double Tetractys 3 
Sponsored by:  Eve Roper ~ Photo #4

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Susan Ashley October 2, 2020 at 6:33 PM Poignant metaphors shine in this beautiful gem, Jenna. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your exquisite poem.. ~Susan

Eve Roper October 2, 2020 at 2:44 PM Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Jenna. I love the theme in your," You Haunt My Mind'', it has great imagery, and flow. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"

Sara Kendrick October 2, 2020 at 11:12 AM Great reflection shape on the page. Good work. Way to go with your win. Sara..Thanks for stopping by with congrats. Jenna Logan October 2, 2020 at 12:48 PM Thanks so much, Sara, and you're welcome for my visit to your poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 7:41 AM - Congratulations on your first place in the contest, Jenna :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jenna Logan October 2, 2020 at 12:47 PM Thanks a whole lot, Anne-Lise. I always appreciate your kindness and wishes. Enjoy your weekend, too!

Victor Buhagiar October 2, 2020 at 7:15 AM Returning your congratulations and wish you the best for your high placement. ~~ Jenna Logan October 2, 2020 at 12:47 PM Thank you so sincerely, Victor.

Krish Radhakrishna October 2, 2020 at 6:13 AM Such a sweet poem Jenna! lovely!! Congrats on your win! Jenna Logan October 2, 2020 at 6:56 AM Thanks an awful lot, Krish.

Linda Alice Fowler October 2, 2020 at 5:43 AM This is beautiful Jenna. A worthy win! Congratulations! Linda Jenna Logan October 2, 2020 at 6:56 AM Thank you so very much, Linda.

Gordon Mcconnell September 24, 2020 at 2:41 PM Such a lovely piece Jenna, love especially love your last line! Blessings, Gordon Jenna Logan September 24, 2020 at 3:46 PM Thanks ever so kindly, Gordon.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2020 at 10:56 AM - A lovely poem, Jenna ... I hope she finds the one she is looking for :) - Best wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jenna Logan September 24, 2020 at 3:46 PM Thanks for the sunshine thoughts, Anne-Lise.

Regina Mcintosh September 24, 2020 at 9:06 AM This is a beauty, dear lady. I enjoyed it and know it is a sure winner. Love to you and blessings too, Gina Jenna Logan September 24, 2020 at 3:45 PM Thank you very much, Regina.

Jan Allison September 24, 2020 at 8:19 AM beautiful but sad Jenna i would hate to be stranded and totally cut off from those i love. good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Jenna Logan September 24, 2020 at 3:45 PM How terribly lonely that would be. Thanks, Jan.