You Go First

A boy and a bear in the wood
can be up to naught but no good
let’s pee on a tree
you go first – after me
if it weren’t for the diaper I would


John G. Lawless
©5/9/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 4:00 AM
Ha, those diapers do get in the way! Cute.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 8:27 PM
This made me laugh....certainly wasn't expecting your ending John. Thanks for the laugh! : )
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 6:17 PM
Ha ha ha hope they didn't bare all:-) hugs Jan xx
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