You Flew the Kite

A kite is soaring through the air
I see your laughter, but I can't hear
except for something in the dark
that sparks a light from yesteryear

The reel unwinds, on fragile wings
No sound of wind, no sound of you 
A spartan view upon the screen
that's faded, frail and sputtering
My throat is tight.   You flew the kite...

The three of you, run down the hill
Your innocence, the timeless dance…
To watch you now, I feel the sun
A cherished piece from yesterday...
My throat is tight.  You flew the kite

No whispered voice or word is said, 
No measure of a favorite song
Just the silent movie, chattering
with bluebird sounds that tag along
in harmony with treasures,  found..

You trampled grass one August day
and childhood quickly swept away
into the world,  just like the kite
You soared so high, that I've lost sight
My throat is tight.... You flew the kite

A summer breeze has stirred your hair
Your smiles, carefree, are unaware
that childhood is a fleeting game
that takes you far away

The sun is like a tangerine
It blinds me from the serpentine
Your kite is lost to summer's sky
As I was standing by

I smiled and watched you fly the kite
And wonder where the years have gone
How fast you grew.  Now, who are you?...
My throat is tight.... You flew the kite

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A. Sharma Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 8:11 AM
Wonderful write Carrie! U hv an amazing pen my dear! congrats on huge win!
May Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 9:58 AM
A sad memory ....well penned....Congrats on your win
Yvonne Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 8:49 PM
Great sad write! Does that make any sense, it must cause you did it. Congratulations on your well earned win.
Smith Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 3:38 PM
A beautiful and sad story..congrats Tim
Arowolo Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:12 PM
You fly the Kite...Hmm!Splendid write,Carrie..Congrats on your superb win...
Callus Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 9:49 AM
Wow Carrie....how sad that childhood has to disappear into the depths of the mind; our children grow...fast...and they will never be the same again. Love the contrast between the children & kite. Touchingly beautiful. Congrats on your podium finish in Linda's contest. // paul
Guzzi Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 7:52 AM
Very touching verse! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 6:03 AM
Very sad and touchy write. congrats on the win, Carrie
Allison Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:33 AM
this brought a lump to my throat. many congrats on your win Carrie:-) hugs jan x
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 11:54 PM
Congratulations Carrie on this beautiful poem. It is heartbreaking how fast they grow up.
Roberts Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 11:25 PM
awesome Carrie, brought a lump to my throat, love this one
A   Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 9:26 PM
Congratulations, Carrie :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 9:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie.... so deep....SKAT
Ryerson Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 4:58 AM
Ah yes my friend...So sad yet so beautiful and where does the time go? Congrats with this gem - Tim
A   Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 5:56 PM
Carrie CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting the ""LONGING poem"" contest <----- Awesome!! If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "FORBIDDEN". Enjoy my latest blog! "ALL SHE WROTE" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15995&PoetID=18720 -------take care & enjoy your coming week. Love*** Linda
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 9:46 PM
A wonderful journey with your Kite Carrie and congratulations on your winning place xx
Maverick Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 3:09 PM
great read on a well worded winner Carrie.."
Brown Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Lets Go Fly A Kite" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Burch Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 9:27 PM
Congratulations on your win Carrie!! Very touching...*tear* bigh hugs, love deb
Song Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 5:47 PM
This entry was read aloud several times and each time it was read, my throat closed up more and more! Such a display of motherly emotion, Carrie. You did this free verse with awesome-ness! Congrats on this finely crafted emotional write. :) Gwendolen
George   Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 1:00 AM
Lovely, Carrie. Sure to top the winners circle. Lainie
Kendrick Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 12:15 PM
I can relate to this...Sometimes children change so that the adult version doesn't seem like the same person..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner...Sara
Susan Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 12:05 PM
Excellent entry for the contest. Nice imagery and flow. Good luck :)
Foulk Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 11:41 AM
a very beautiful and creative piece. thank you for commenting on A Yellow Rose. I made this up, i did lose a son, but he was 39, this one was for all the fathers who lost a son early in life.
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