Seren Roberts Poet Verse

You Fill Up My Senses - Music To My Ears Contest

*You fill up my senses like a night in the forest*
You are my life 
thoughts of you fill my soul.
Through rain and shine.
loving dreams brings us close,
My arms want to hold you
my lips want to burn under yours.
My eyes sparkle with the thought of you
like green jewels, in a limpid pool
We are as one
**Come let me hold you, let me love you again**

* and ** the two lines I used from
Annie's Song - John Denver

Contest by Silent One - music to my ears contest

27/72015

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Theresa Cw July 27, 2015 at 1:39 PM I'll second all that Viv has said, I haven't been with Poetry Soup to long and I enjoy reading everyone's poems so far. The beauty you pen is so very beautiful Seren. You and Lyric Man sure pen quite exquisite together. I sure feel like this should come in first place..... Hugs Theresa Seren Roberts August 2, 2015 at 7:18 AM Thank you Theresa, I enjoyed the compliment.....Seren

Viv Wigley July 27, 2015 at 1:38 AM Lovely, gentle write, Seren, nicely interwoven. I was wondering how people would approach this contest, and you've done it really well. Best wishes for the contest. Viv x Seren Roberts August 2, 2015 at 7:18 AM Thanks Viv.... Was a pleasure to do....Seren