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You Escaped My Dreams

Where are you now Why have you escaped my dreams You’ve been gone awhile and I missed you so I visited our place every night I scouted every corner I stood by and waited out in hope you’d come I did double rounds just to be sure I didn’t miss any section that you might be awaiting me there Yet every night I come by an open empty space greets me melancholy I thought about calling you but what number should I dial I thought about writing you a letter but what address should I send to Then I thought maybe there’s a way I’m going to ask God to deliver my message to you Please God would you deliver my message to my mama chi Here it is: Will you come visit me tonight for I long to know you’re okay Will you come visit me tonight because I miss you so Will you come visit me tonight because I need you so Mama Chi will you come visit me tonight because you miss me too Your voice Your touch Your smile Your love Your everything I miss it all but you escaped my dreams Akkina Missing my great granny who was always so kind, gentle, and most caring...

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Date: 8/25/2023 4:27:00 PM
A lovely heartfelt poem, Akkina. It reveals your heart to us. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 8/22/2023 9:13:00 PM
Simply "beautiful". It is sad when they do not visit us in our dreams anymore, but perhaps they feel that we are ready and well prepared to deal with life on our own without their interception - yet, somehow, I still believe they never leave us, they are always close by watching and protecting us. Much love, Leanne.
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Date: 2/4/2021 5:39:00 PM
Hi Akkina, You have penned such a heartfelt emotional write. I could sense your desire to see your grandmother. Your letter to God was so moving and touching. Perhaps she would visit in your dreams soon- Alexis
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Akkina Downing
Date: 2/4/2021 8:37:00 PM
Your lovely comment made me smile a sweet one, Alexis. Thank you kindly :)
Date: 2/2/2021 12:51:00 PM
Love this sweet emotional poem dear Akkina... Just lovely. I could feel the love within your heart. Susan :)
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Akkina Downing
Date: 2/2/2021 8:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan :)
Date: 2/2/2021 12:58:00 AM
Oh my dear sweet friend, what a lovely write this is... I can feel your heart... and your longing to meet your grandma again. Don't worry she will be sending her blessings to you daily with her prayers from ABOVE there. Have a lovely day Kina... Hugs ~ Ani
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Akkina Downing
Date: 2/2/2021 8:29:00 PM
You are just the sweetest, Ani. Thank you so much... Hugs ~ Kina
Date: 2/1/2021 1:19:00 PM
So tender, so touching, Pangie xx
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Akkina Downing
Date: 2/1/2021 7:01:00 PM
Thanks, Pangie...
Date: 2/1/2021 6:09:00 AM
You brought me to tears towards the end, Akkina. This is so from the bottom of your heart-- filled with love and memories. A touching write my friend. I am saving this in my FAVES.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 2/1/2021 7:10:00 AM
You’re a sweet friend, Vijay, thank you always for your constant support. I truly appreciate it.
Date: 1/31/2021 11:01:00 PM
Great tribute to your granny. We tend to miss them most of all. ~~
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Akkina Downing
Date: 2/1/2021 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, Vic.
Date: 1/31/2021 10:08:00 PM
Most wonderfully a beautiful dedicated honored poem. For a grand lady I know you surely miss. But remember you're part of her so she yet breathes in your existence every heart beat reaches your soul. Peace and blessings always. A grand Write! : ) James
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Akkina Downing
Date: 2/1/2021 7:07:00 AM
Thank you my friend :)
Date: 1/31/2021 9:12:00 PM
Heart touching write. It made me feel your miss and saddened me. Great write. Take care Rama
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Akkina Downing
Date: 2/1/2021 7:06:00 AM
Awe, what a sweet comment, Rama, thank you. ~ Akkina
Date: 1/31/2021 8:42:00 PM
When you miss someone, they always find a way to enter your mind and your heart at just the right time. This is beautiful and tender. Your thoughts caress gently around me. ~ Brandy
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Akkina Downing
Date: 2/1/2021 7:05:00 AM
Yes I believe that too. Thank you, Brandy for this lovely comment ~ Akkina

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