You Deserve More Than Me

Your eyes, I feel them looking Eternally they peer away I wish that I could capture them I wish, I hope, I pray But no, they look not for me They look for someone, true With a love to give well, always That is what, is meant for you Your lips and tongue, they call out I hear them on the breeze A voice that’s like no other That brings me to my knees But no, they call not to me Your voice calls for someone, true May he have the love you seek, my dear That is what, is meant for you Your hands, they reach to touch so much With eagerness, they wish to feel Their softness is wonderfully caressing They can make a broken heart heal But no, they reach not for me They feel for that someone who Can touch you as you touch him That is what, is meant for you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/3/2009 2:48:00 AM
Sigh, and such is life, is it not? always one step away from something, or someone...beautifully heartbreaking, Michael, love, Kristin
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Date: 2/3/2009 1:01:00 AM
Like the kyrielle list feeling within this one Michael.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/2/2009 4:39:00 PM
Michael, this is so beautiful and heartbreaking. You write with such depth and passion...not to mention flawless form. Love, Donna G.
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Date: 2/2/2009 8:19:00 AM
Could be this person feels the same for you and doesn't know how to show it. Beaytiful write, I think we all find faults within ourselves that only we see, Blessings, Ron
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Date: 2/2/2009 8:00:00 AM
Lik the kyriell flavour here to this beautiful writing Michael.rgds Brian
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Date: 2/2/2009 7:35:00 AM
Great presentation , Michael , in word-flow and rhyme .....
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Date: 2/2/2009 6:24:00 AM
Lovely and sad.... not being loved in return, breaks ones heart to feel the pain. ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/2/2009 5:45:00 AM
Beautiful, from the very first word to the last, a poem so caring but so sad. You have captured desire, and truth in this write. I love this, always, Christy
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