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I love you he says, smiling. Twist his arms around mine, fingers along mine, mind at pace with mine. Tick. Tock. I love you too whispered reply. Empty words? Only as empty as the smile.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/5/2011 7:24:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your most creative poetry tonight with it's interesting theme..hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. our contests are free to enter so please check them out and good luck with luv..

Manouchka Doreus

Date: 4/5/2011 4:21:00 PM

amazing... wonderful job and welcome to poetry soup... this is a beautiful poem and I'm hoping to see more

Trista Ince

Date: 4/5/2011 2:10:00 PM

I really loved your poem. Great job(:

Sheol Moribund

Date: 4/5/2011 1:05:00 PM

Dear Annie: Great poem. Just because a person smiles when they tell you something, it doesn't make it true!!! Have a fantastic day.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/5/2011 10:30:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Annie. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

James Foulk

Date: 4/5/2011 10:04:00 AM

a great piece of creative poetry.