Eve Roper Poet Free verse

You Complete Me Collaboration With James Edward Lee Sr

“My eyes look for you;
My heart bleeds the truth
My spirit enters your soul completely
as it strips every fiber weave and holds my hunger.
Gradually weaken the mask I always wore until there was none.
You’re the rhythmic beating flicker gently,
songs pass my ears lodged in each chamber of my heart.
It is you I seek.
By doing the above
Reaching up
You complete me”


YOU COMPLETE ME Collaboration with James Edward Lee Sr.
3/18/2019  

Poetry Contest: YOU COMPLETE ME Collaboration with James Edward Lee Sr.
Sponsored by: James Edward Lee Sr.

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Sara Kendrick March 28, 2019 at 12:25 PM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go.

Subimal Sinha-Roy March 28, 2019 at 8:41 AM Congratulations, Eve on your win.

John Katz March 23, 2019 at 8:11 AM Great verse. Made me recall someone I once loved and lost.

John Castellenas March 20, 2019 at 3:48 PM Amazing use of words. You made the reader believe and understand. A outstanding poem.

Tom Cunningham March 19, 2019 at 1:47 PM Well written Eve and James, wonderful collaboration. Tom. Eve Roper March 19, 2019 at 2:47 PM Thank you ,Tom. Hugs Eve ~`*

Mystic Rose Rose March 19, 2019 at 10:20 AM wow, you really pull out all the reservations and locks on this one, nice collaboration Eve, congrats on a unified work of art. xo Eve Roper March 19, 2019 at 11:41 AM Thank you for the inspirational compliment, Pixie, Hugs Eve ~`*

Demetrios Trifiatis March 19, 2019 at 8:35 AM So true: You complete one another poetically! Marvelous work dear, Eve and dear James! Eve Roper March 19, 2019 at 11:41 AM Thank you for the inspirational compliment, Demetrios, Hugs Eve ~`*

Mahtab Bangalee March 19, 2019 at 5:55 AM superb poetic expression Eve Roper March 19, 2019 at 8:06 AM “Thank you, Mahtab, for your wonderful compliment and inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve ~`*

Arthur Vaso March 19, 2019 at 12:51 AM I feel I repeat myself, but I must say it again, great poetry. Eve Roper March 19, 2019 at 8:05 AM “Thank you, thank you, you always inspire me. Hugs Eve ~`*

Caren Krutsinger March 19, 2019 at 12:44 AM Eve, you always amaze me with your romantic words, and your clear mastery of the poetic styles. Well done, my friend. A delight. Good luck in James' contest. Eve Roper March 19, 2019 at 8:03 AM “Thank you, thank you, it’s very kind of you, Caren, I am always honored to hear your compliments and the inspiration you always give me and how they make me feel. Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier March 19, 2019 at 12:44 AM Bravo, Eve. Succinct and well merged. GL Eve Roper March 19, 2019 at 8:04 AM “Thank you,Line, you swelled my head, but you did yours just as well . Hugs Eve ~`*