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You Complete Me Collaboration With James Edward Lee Sr

“My eyes look for you;
My heart bleeds the truth
My spirit enters your soul completely
as it strips every fiber weave and holds my hunger.
Gradually weaken the mask I always wore until there was none.
You’re the rhythmic beating flicker gently,
songs pass my ears lodged in each chamber of my heart.
It is you I seek.
By doing the above
Reaching up
You complete me”


YOU COMPLETE ME Collaboration with James Edward Lee Sr.
3/18/2019  

Poetry Contest: YOU COMPLETE ME Collaboration with James Edward Lee Sr.
Sponsored by: James Edward Lee Sr.

Copyright © Eve Roper | Year Posted 2019

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Sara Kendrick Date: 3/28/2019 12:25:00 PM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 3/28/2019 8:41:00 AM Congratulations, Eve on your win. Login to Reply

John Katz Date: 3/23/2019 8:11:00 AM Great verse. Made me recall someone I once loved and lost. Login to Reply

John Castellenas Date: 3/20/2019 3:48:00 PM Amazing use of words. You made the reader believe and understand. A outstanding poem. Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/19/2019 1:47:00 PM Well written Eve and James, wonderful collaboration. Tom. Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 3/19/2019 2:47:00 PM Thank you ,Tom. Hugs Eve ~`*

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/19/2019 10:20:00 AM wow, you really pull out all the reservations and locks on this one, nice collaboration Eve, congrats on a unified work of art. xo Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 3/19/2019 11:41:00 AM Thank you for the inspirational compliment, Pixie, Hugs Eve ~`*

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/19/2019 8:35:00 AM So true: You complete one another poetically! Marvelous work dear, Eve and dear James! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 3/19/2019 11:41:00 AM Thank you for the inspirational compliment, Demetrios, Hugs Eve ~`*

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 3/19/2019 5:55:00 AM superb poetic expression Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 3/19/2019 8:06:00 AM “Thank you, Mahtab, for your wonderful compliment and inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve ~`*

Arthur Vaso Date: 3/19/2019 12:51:00 AM I feel I repeat myself, but I must say it again, great poetry. Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 3/19/2019 8:05:00 AM “Thank you, thank you, you always inspire me. Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier Date: 3/19/2019 12:44:00 AM Bravo, Eve. Succinct and well merged. GL Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 3/19/2019 8:04:00 AM “Thank you,Line, you swelled my head, but you did yours just as well . Hugs Eve ~`*

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/19/2019 12:44:00 AM Eve, you always amaze me with your romantic words, and your clear mastery of the poetic styles. Well done, my friend. A delight. Good luck in James' contest. Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 3/19/2019 8:03:00 AM “Thank you, thank you, it’s very kind of you, Caren, I am always honored to hear your compliments and the inspiration you always give me and how they make me feel. Hugs Eve ~`*