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You Complete Me Collaboration With James Edward Lee Sr

“My eyes look for you; My heart bleeds the truth My spirit enters your soul completely as it strips every fiber weave and holds my hunger. Gradually weaken the mask I always wore until there was none. You’re the rhythmic beating flicker gently, songs pass my ears lodged in each chamber of my heart. It is you I seek. By doing the above Reaching up You complete me” YOU COMPLETE ME Collaboration with James Edward Lee Sr. 3/18/2019 Poetry Contest: YOU COMPLETE ME Collaboration with James Edward Lee Sr. Sponsored by: James Edward Lee Sr.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/28/2019 12:25:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Way to go.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 3/28/2019 8:41:00 AM

Congratulations, Eve on your win.

John Katz

Date: 3/23/2019 8:11:00 AM

Great verse. Made me recall someone I once loved and lost.

John Castellenas

Date: 3/20/2019 3:48:00 PM

Amazing use of words. You made the reader believe and understand. A outstanding poem.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/19/2019 1:47:00 PM

Well written Eve and James, wonderful collaboration. Tom.

Eve Roper
Date: 3/19/2019 2:47:00 PM

Thank you ,Tom. Hugs Eve ~`*

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/19/2019 10:20:00 AM

wow, you really pull out all the reservations and locks on this one, nice collaboration Eve, congrats on a unified work of art. xo

Eve Roper
Date: 3/19/2019 11:41:00 AM

Thank you for the inspirational compliment, Pixie, Hugs Eve ~`*

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/19/2019 8:35:00 AM

So true: You complete one another poetically! Marvelous work dear, Eve and dear James!

Eve Roper
Date: 3/19/2019 11:41:00 AM

Thank you for the inspirational compliment, Demetrios, Hugs Eve ~`*

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/19/2019 5:55:00 AM

superb poetic expression

Eve Roper
Date: 3/19/2019 8:06:00 AM

“Thank you, Mahtab, for your wonderful compliment and inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve ~`*

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/19/2019 12:51:00 AM

I feel I repeat myself, but I must say it again, great poetry.

Eve Roper
Date: 3/19/2019 8:05:00 AM

“Thank you, thank you, you always inspire me. Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/19/2019 12:44:00 AM

Bravo, Eve. Succinct and well merged. GL

Eve Roper
Date: 3/19/2019 8:04:00 AM

“Thank you,Line, you swelled my head, but you did yours just as well . Hugs Eve ~`*

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/19/2019 12:44:00 AM

Eve, you always amaze me with your romantic words, and your clear mastery of the poetic styles. Well done, my friend. A delight. Good luck in James' contest.

Eve Roper
Date: 3/19/2019 8:03:00 AM

“Thank you, thank you, it’s very kind of you, Caren, I am always honored to hear your compliments and the inspiration you always give me and how they make me feel. Hugs Eve ~`*