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you come over hear

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                 ya know who that be
                  on that park bench
                        that's eve
                           mine
                          chavah

                  look in thuh puddle
                    look twixt thoze
                        rain drops
                   ya know who that
                             be
                      that's chavah
                      10yearz ago

                he'z not go'n through
                        that again

                              ,)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/1/2025 2:48:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your work. Creative and well thought out. Thanks for sharing it with us. Way to go. Sara K

James Peranteau
Date: 7/2/2025 5:11:00 PM

every werd be true dear poet ') hopes yer summer iz awesome...much love