You Come Calling

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a whispered serenade and in the night i extend my heart to you not knowing what will become of us AP: Honorable Mention 2023 Posted on May 15, 2023

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/17/2023 6:41:00 PM

The anticipation of the unknown is palpable in your lines, Line! Whether disappointment of fulfillment follows matters not, poetry-wise. Brilliant! ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2023 9:15:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon ~

Jan Allison

Date: 5/15/2023 1:40:00 PM

Such short lines paint a vivid picture which is absolutely delightful Line:-) hugs jan

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2023 9:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan ~