You Cleaned Up My Dirty Past

Can I speak so true and free
About all you have done for me
You gave my life a new meaning
Like you did a thorough cleaning
Of my past --threw it away
So I know that a new day
Will begin and start with you
There is nothing you won't do
To prove how much love you will
Give me to climb up a hill
Right up to the very top
Where you'll catch me if I drop
Into my past memories
Thinking of the history
That has kept me in turmoil
Leaving my heart full of soil
From all the abuse I took
But then I just have to look
Into your eyes and I will break
Out of this haze--glad to take
All the love you want to give
So I can and always live
With a new hope and this joy
Since you became my savior boy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dunn Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 6:33 PM
Great emotional l write as usual my friend, I enjoyed reading your wonderful words always, it's full of realism and passions confusion all cleared up.Now you may enter a whole new world of love and devotion. welcome to the other side of love. this is what your write speaks to me dear friend. cheri
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 9:07 AM
Great flow and rhyme..Very passionate as well..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Pettit Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 1:14 AM
Nicely written about someone who has done more than just a janitorial task for you. Good descriptiveness and rhyming here.
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