You Can'T Go Back

You can’t go back.
Although they seem so real
those achy ambulations
along the backstreets of my mind.

Time has tinged the brightness,
shaded the darkness,
edged my senses with tension,
raised perception’s heartbeat.

Sounds drift across tingling hairs
chill greets a passing stranger
children dart beneath dimming streetlights
church bells haunting the silence.

A soft golden yellow teases the windows
vague shadows behind drawn curtains
hard tears forming in visitors eyes.
He can’t go back…..nor does he want to.


©9/24/2019

In the backstreets of my mind Poetry Contest
sponsor Silent One
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Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 3:31 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 8:15 AM
Thank you Anne-Like
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:16 PM
You really created a well thought out poem here, John. I wish I could come up with such poignancy on a theme like this one. I hope this one got a first place . That is what it deserved. Congrats in the contest.
Lawless Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 8:14 AM
Andrea, I have a T-shirt that reads....I WAS MUGGED ON MEMORY LANE. I believe we all sugar coat our memories or at least i try to...
La France Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:04 PM
John congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent write!
Lawless Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 8:11 AM
thank you for taking the time to read and comment
One Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 3:29 PM
You are right, you cant... nice one John.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Lawless Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Yeah, and those trips through the "mind" field can be very hazardous. Thanks for reading and commenting
Mcintosh Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 10:25 PM
This is just amazing. I love it and it should do wonderfully in the contest. Blessings
Lawless Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 8:09 AM
Thank you Regina, your comment and insight is always appreciated.
Chiri Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 4:40 PM
Wow John a really amazing poem! I think you nailed the contest!;)
Lawless Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 8:08 AM
Hey Brenda, thanks for stopping by to read and comment. Sorry I took soo long to respond, I've been wrangling two toddler grandchildren.
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