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You Can'T Go Back

You can’t go back. Although they seem so real those achy ambulations along the backstreets of my mind. Time has tinged the brightness, shaded the darkness, edged my senses with tension, raised perception’s heartbeat. Sounds drift across tingling hairs chill greets a passing stranger children dart beneath dimming streetlights church bells haunting the silence. A soft golden yellow teases the windows vague shadows behind drawn curtains hard tears forming in visitors eyes. He can’t go back…..nor does he want to. ©9/24/2019 In the backstreets of my mind Poetry Contest sponsor Silent One

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Date: 9/27/2019 3:31:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Lawless
Date: 9/27/2019 8:15:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Like
Date: 9/26/2019 5:16:00 PM
You really created a well thought out poem here, John. I wish I could come up with such poignancy on a theme like this one. I hope this one got a first place . That is what it deserved. Congrats in the contest.
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John Lawless
Date: 9/27/2019 8:14:00 AM
Andrea, I have a T-shirt that reads....I WAS MUGGED ON MEMORY LANE. I believe we all sugar coat our memories or at least i try to...
Date: 9/26/2019 4:04:00 PM
John congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent write!
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John Lawless
Date: 9/27/2019 8:11:00 AM
thank you for taking the time to read and comment
Date: 9/26/2019 3:29:00 PM
You are right, you cant... nice one John.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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John Lawless
Date: 9/27/2019 8:10:00 AM
Yeah, and those trips through the "mind" field can be very hazardous. Thanks for reading and commenting
Date: 9/24/2019 10:25:00 PM
This is just amazing. I love it and it should do wonderfully in the contest. Blessings
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John Lawless
Date: 9/27/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thank you Regina, your comment and insight is always appreciated.
Date: 9/24/2019 4:40:00 PM
Wow John a really amazing poem! I think you nailed the contest!;)
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John Lawless
Date: 9/27/2019 8:08:00 AM
Hey Brenda, thanks for stopping by to read and comment. Sorry I took soo long to respond, I've been wrangling two toddler grandchildren.

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