You Can Try

to make your kids' world the same as yours has been if it works, the universe suffers

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Debra Squyres

Date: 12/27/2011 10:19:00 AM

so right !!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/27/2011 10:03:00 AM

i totally agree, yet it's hard to stop trying to do so. it's too easy to get caught up in "the good old days." i admit to being guilty of that. nicely written!

Tony Lane

Date: 12/27/2011 7:42:00 AM

My kids visit my world and I visit theirs. I love it when the come and I love it when I see what they've done.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/27/2011 6:16:00 AM

Yes,you can try..........Hugs Anne-Lise

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/27/2011 4:52:00 AM

If'n it aint broke don't fix it..) no more to add..!