You Can Lead a Horse To Water

Toasty mornings with teakettles whistling bring to mind Danish days on Marata’s 
horse farm, ponies prancing in the unusually warm sunlight, and new fangled 
sparkling silver water fountains. Mirada, Karen and Laura’s Mom hosted Bob, Jamie 
and I for a summer vacation. We had just settled into the whitewashed kitchen 
when the problem was presented to us. For years the housed herd of guest horses 
had been watered by filling lovely old white porcelain cast iron tubs which had been 
scattered all over the rolling green fields of the farm in Faum. 

Mirada had the forward thinking idea of saving farm hand time [and her the hourly 
wage] of piping water to these beautiful horses with new fountains! Yes, my 
lovelies, all you have to do is push your nose right here. Out bubbles crisp cool clean 
water, minus the dead flies, which often drowned in the old tub! Seems horses are 
very suspicious. Nope the herd was having none of it. Soon, if not cajoled, they 
would be passing out from lack of water in the Danish summer’s heat. What foreign 
creature had replaced their friendly old white tub of water? Where was their water? 
They saw no water. Sure there was a scent of it from that pole but “What the 
heck?” snorted the black stallion shaking his head at the girls.

We were told there would be no breakfast, lunch or dinner for us until we helped 
get those horses watered. So off we went, shuffling our feet to a meet and greet 
with the herd.  Marata and the girls knew the horses. We almost knew a horse from 
a cow. I went right up to this large black beauty, pet his nose and rubbed my cheek 
on his face, love at first sight! Blackie started following me and we walked toward 
the fountain. Then the sun glanced off the dreaded thing and he shied. I pushed the 
control, filled my hands with water and brought him some. Lordy, lordy he drank 
from my hands! The herd behind him whinnied. I tried to get him nearer the fountain 
but it was a no, go. He’d drink from my hands but not the fountain. It just goes to 
show you, you can lead a horse to water but you can’t make him drink, is really 
TRUE! 

*The next morning Laura begged her own pony AGAIN to drink. He finally did the rest did too then ;)
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Freeman Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Debbie, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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June 23, 2011 at 9:13 PM
Great Narrative you composed here, dear Debbie! Congratulations on your win. Love, Iolanda Giddy-up! That's my last name :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 8:27 PM
ah, so they DID drink in the end after all!!! what a story, Deb. You did really well telling this tale. I really enjoyed it. Congrats on your win.
Taylor Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 4:43 PM
Congrats on your win, Deb. Great story. Nice going. xxxRalph
Horne Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 2:35 PM
Many congrats on your win, Debs : )
Mehta Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 1:44 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Debbie
Sweetheart Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 12:55 PM
Congrats Debbie on your exciting win in the horse contest with this excellent entry luv.. a stunning adventure .. thankxx for the reply on labeling form for entry ..enjoy ..luv..
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 9:44 PM
I lived on a horses back my first job at 10 years. No wonder I can't quite get the punctuation right. Missed school a bit.Horses are like women, jealous types sometimes, always watch the ears:) Very interesting tale of the horse Debbie. I miss old friends amongst them. xo Don
Joseph Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 5:11 PM
Bob and Jamie must be your children...what a magical experience for them.
Mac Donald Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 7:26 PM
Another wonderful story, Debbie!! Love horses and they can shy away from the darnest things. The black had bonded nicely with you...nice. Must still give you a warm feeling? This would make a great children's story! The kid in me LOVES it!! Best wishes, Mikki
Merritt Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 9:24 AM
Lol love the memory n the narrative keep going
Mehta Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 3:49 PM
Very engaging write, Debbie
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